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03-26-06, 09:53 AM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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Keep It On Me feat. NuSense
IP: 5356 7051
Ayo........wass the situation....droppin another track
scream at the duke aight.... www.myspace.com/dacument http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224936 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225023 VOTE HOTT!!!!!!!!!
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03-26-06, 10:09 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: A23D ABD7
Aight
Koo Beat............ 1st Verse: Your Flows Nice,Feeling The Delivery Koo Emotion Lyrics Are Koo,For This Topic Presnece Is Straight...Seem Confident..... Hook's Nice,Feelin It Verse 2: This is Better Flows Upped,Deliverys Nice Seem HYPED.... Lyrics Are Nice Hook Well..Nice Track Dude,Feelin It Overall:8/10 One.
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03-26-06, 10:25 AM
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IP: 64CA 6C26
I like the beat
ur flow is good...but u could actually amp these vocals a notch... lyrics fit the track = pretty coo I like the hook and the delivery of it not a bad drop bro 1 |
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03-26-06, 03:54 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 5B9F 36FB
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03-26-06, 04:28 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP: FEAC 2479
yeah yeah yeah... first time peeping ya joints.... beat was nice.... like how da vocals sounded nice and crisp... even the echo...
1st verse was aiight... like everyone else said it fits da track but i felt ya coulda flipped how ya said some shyt to make it more effective loving the hook... gunshots are too loud though... turn em down a notch.... almost can't hear the rest of da hook because of it second verse is much better than the first.. seemed put together a lot better... almost as if you were more conscience of what you were writing... good shyt... if first verse was like that it woulda made for a better track... overall decent shyt... i ain'y really into that gun talk street shyt but it was aiight stay up..one
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03-26-06, 08:14 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP: 5356 7051
goodlookz for all the feed.....i appreciate all the talk
get at me
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03-26-06, 09:50 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
alright i'm peepin this shit out
first up - the flow is pretty nice....not enough reverb on it....your lyrics fit the track well hmm...this shit aint half bad the hook is pretty nice....catchy Second up - the flow is real nice.....the lyrics are tight and good punchlines kept it real street...i'm feelin this a lot This shit is pretty hot fam......on the real i could picture this on a mixtape Keep shit up stay up |
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03-27-06, 09:48 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP: 5356 7051
goodlookz fam.....keep the feed coming yall, all day
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03-27-06, 11:05 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 48AD BE9B
Beat is pretty disgustin. A clubby beat that I'd actually club to lol.
First verse: Lyrics pretty ill, flow stays on point the whole way though. The vol on your hook should have come up like 4-5dB, woulda felt like a pro track. Second verse, flows on, the lyrics were pretty good, nothin mind blowin, but didn't work against hte track so can't complain. Other than that, the hook was the same as the first, so I still feel the same about it. Jerzey stand up!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225217<-----do the right thing
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03-28-06, 02:47 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 0012 D27D
who made them covers for u dac they hot lol (ME) keep doin ya thing 100
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03-29-06, 05:29 PM
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Is F'in Bored
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IP: 0BFD F3C2
Damn not exactly my style but you know, this shit was pretty flame, i could hear it in a club somewhere wit niggas gettin carried out. Beat was hype. First dude was hard and mellow, decent lyrics, jason mask was funny. second dude was hype, lyrics just as good.
8/10 V/Dacument and Nusense My Final Fantasy
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03-29-06, 05:43 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP: 5356 7051
goodlookz yall, i appreciate all the love on this track for real....keep it coming, i love all feedback though
get at me uno
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03-29-06, 07:57 PM
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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 6602 AC7B
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How bout you appreciate the feedback by actually returning it.
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03-30-06, 04:50 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP: 5356 7051
keep the feed up yall, scream at me
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