Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit.


Crewbattle
STFU VS somethin avenue

3 day check
3 day drop.

dont check or drop, you lose.

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 02-27-06 at 12:15 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - expired battle win

i get to battle a vet wow.........................

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on my way lol.


Good luck mate .

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-06 06:45 PM.

lol...you know whats coming.

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I got some dirt that'll leave you fuckin hurt cuz
I got more lines on you then your fuckin shirt does
You're the worst Young, while i'm spitting that ill shit
You're coming up short
but if you grew 2 feet those clothes'd STILL FIT
Get killed kid,just for wearing those clothes i'll hand ya pain
Though you look pretty sweet, ya, just like a human candy cane
this man been shamed,your wack on the track so we hating you
cause when cashflows,he bankrupts companies entire revenue
your fakin dude, you fuckin clown just hand me the crown
cause your wack clothes are nothin but blatent hand me downs
real thugs are liftin stores to make bucks, ya feel son
this fags stuck in the library liftin books to read from
you cant harm me, you want a barbie..whats stoppin you
bitch even put money in his name to get a dollar to (doll or two)
shit..explinations in brackets..suddenly im forceless
but that stucture STILL aint nearly half as played as yours is
you poor prick,im fresh..n' thats somethin for this man to hate
cause structures like his were last seen right back in 98
thats right mate..every time this fag posts, he puts the junk
i may aswell be a sex offender cos my verse just fucked the young

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I dropped my verse man,

try and drop early...............

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Young Money has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-06 07:54 PM.

Waste of my time putting these words to text/
Soakin these cats n hang them to dis-infect/
Only props im givin is to Daubs n his ill dialect/sike

Im quick to kill STFU with swift verses//
the undercover sniper in cyphers, ya shit's worthless//

-unf- spit curses, murda ya lyrics at top speeds//
Mimesis "fumble the fireplace and you still wouldn't drop heat"//

YM a hot 'G', with gasoline, breath and fire lyrics//
my entire crew, focused on killin this tired queer shit//

My Sharona you used to be in our crew but never used to SHOW~TO~BATTLES//so we left you in ya push chair to master the art of TROWING~RATTLES//
and Yo.. lame force .. oh ..Flame Source, I'm tight on battle stages//
rearange ya destination, like a spiteful travel agent//

I heard that STFU volunteer for REAR-PROBES/
They needed flava in their head, so instead i pissed in their EAR-LOBES/
DAUBS this is the first n last time u'll GET-TOLD/
This ain't no game of poker but I think yall should STILL-FOLD/

2 lines left, i'm stressed. forget-it/
left these mc's messed. didn't even need edit,
so i'll put down the mic and call STFU a medic/

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lets gouppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppi n

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I win 5-0 .

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5=0 lol get out of herrrr with that bullshit^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Daubs

Daubs:
I got some dirt that'll leave you fuckin hurt cuz
I got more lines on you then your fuckin shirt does
8/10 - Niice Opener.
You're the worst Young, while i'm spitting that ill shit
You're coming up short
but if you grew 2 feet those clothes'd STILL FIT
8/10 - Niice Personal.
Get killed kid,just for wearing those clothes i'll hand ya pain
Though you look pretty sweet, ya, just like a human candy cane
5/10 - OK.
this man been shamed,your wack on the track so we hating you
cause when cashflows,he bankrupts companies entire revenue
3/10 - MEH.
your fakin dude, you fuckin clown just hand me the crown
cause your wack clothes are nothin but blatent hand me downs
4/10 - Like first line, not second.
real thugs are liftin stores to make bucks, ya feel son
this fags stuck in the library liftin books to read from
3/10 - Coulda hit him harder, with this.
you cant harm me, you want a barbie..whats stoppin you
bitch even put money in his name to get a dollar to (doll or two)
5/10 - Good Wordplay.
shit..explinations in brackets..suddenly im forceless
but that stucture STILL aint nearly half as played as yours is
6/10 - Good Punchline.
you poor prick,im fresh..n' thats somethin for this man to hate
cause structures like his were last seen right back in 98
3/10 - Didnt like it.
thats right mate..every time this fag posts, he puts the junk
i may aswell be a sex offender cos my verse just fucked the young
6/10 - Niice Closer.
51/100

You had a good verse, punches where hitten hard, it flowed well, and you used good wordplay and personals.


Young Money:
Waste of my time putting these words to text/
Soakin these cats n hang them to dis-infect/
2/10 - Weak Opener.
Only props im givin is to Daubs n his ill dialect/sike
1/10 - NIIIICE. sike!
Im quick to kill STFU with swift verses//
the undercover sniper in cyphers, ya shit's worthless//
2/10 - Stick to cyphers.
-unf- spit curses, murda ya lyrics at top speeds//
Mimesis "fumble the fireplace and you still wouldn't drop heat"//
3/10 - What the hells with menition other RV Members?
YM a hot 'G', with gasoline, breath and fire lyrics//
my entire crew, focused on killin this tired queer shit//
2/10 - Stupid.
My Sharona you used to be in our crew but never used to SHOW~TO~BATTLES//so we left you in ya push chair to master the art of TROWING~RATTLES//
4/10 - OK Rhymes.
and Yo.. lame force .. oh ..Flame Source, I'm tight on battle stages//
rearange ya destination, like a spiteful travel agent//
4/10 - OK.
I heard that STFU volunteer for REAR-PROBES/
They needed flava in their head, so instead i pissed in their EAR-LOBES/
1/10 - Good for You.
DAUBS this is the first n last time u'll GET-TOLD/
This ain't no game of poker but I think yall should STILL-FOLD/
2/10 - Bad.
2 lines left, i'm stressed. forget-it/
left these mc's messed. didn't even need edit,
so i'll put down the mic and call STFU a medic/
2/10 - Horible rhymes!!
24/100

You used an iight flow, but the rest was bad. Your punches were played, your rhyme hardly rhymed in some parts. No good personals at all.


OVERALL: This was a one sided battle, with Daubs takin' the win. He used the better punches, personals, wordplay, and flow. He had some real good rhymes in there. Young you were just out done, you didnt use many good punches, your flow was decent, but no good wordplay or personals where in your verse.

Vote - Daubs

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