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Old 03-24-06, 10:53 AM   #1
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Most of this OM makes no sense, but some of it is thought provoking. I dunno what I was doing when I did this, but read it. if anyone has read my OM diary they know about nejla and shit I wrote this VERY PARANOID about everything.

So yeah.. I was walking to the corner store right, and I tripped and fell into nejla's fathers room where he randomly told me about his secret iffiliation with the illuminati for some reason. He then locks the doors and gives me some vodka.

Black= me
Red=Nejla
Blue= Nejla's father

Hello Melvin Dockett................ may I offer you a drink?
You just gave me a drink, but now its really hard for me to see
excellent then, have you ever heard of a nejla siddig?
about yay high, light brown complexion, and never gets pig(she's muslim)

Nejla? She's a female? Yes. Doesn't ring a bell
Wait! That's my wife. What about her? Does she need some help?
Nejlas pops:

Why did you smirk? you see it.......... isn't her that needs it
yiggity yack yack yack yack yack, yocka purple penis..
(too lazy to make a story line so here's him rambling about the illumanti's plan)
We send messages through, and kill whats precious to you
then trap you in deception, and never give a reference of truth
And all these wacky kids, feel they have to beat the system.
but don't know thier idea of rebellion's actually submission...
it's a double reverse, reflected, inverted perception..
not on purpous, but the diversion was the persian election
the bombs goin over the cars, and you notice the harm
overseas, but in your home, your soul will lower the guard
the war got the citizens ignorant, there's really one more
you barricaded the windows, but opened your front door.

But why? Why are you telling me all this before I die?
because I needed to fill up the verses of the storyline
but it doesnt make any sense, no you just dont understand
for all you know, your existance could be assisting uncle sam
and his massive plan, you should of killed yourself when u had the chance
Come in nejla, It's about time for you to trash your man







NEJLA? omfg not you too.... its impossible
you're not a prop to fool me, I mean what do you got to do
with their plot and movement, I mean
You telling me your love is fake? nobody feels on judgement day
I wasn't drugged or paid to do this, my voice wasnt dubbed or taped
my father runs the thoughts and ideas u think is custom traits..
I was sent by him to make u love me and gain your trust,I'm bait

You're lying baby, I still lo- I mean didnt you find it weird..
that in the most vurnurable time of your life, that I'd appear?
Spul wasnt part of this, in the start you wasnt a target then
but you couldn't be that smart if you open ya heart so quick..

but what about kevin and chris? are they all irrelevant?
making you jealous, was an added effect to embellish it
what could bring you closer to me then u tryna crush the evil?
you're no idiot, but a genius corrupted is just as feeble
lossed in your little crush...melvin give it up, you're see through
I can predict every single move you make, this stuff's cerebral

wow@ the world being doomed, but is there a way to save us?
Well, you have an ultimatum, we dont even have to break up
I'm listening.. when you perish, the illumaniti is dead..
My father didnt wanna stop untill your whole body was red
So you can gase at the world, and think of the sake of them..
or stay alive and THEN we can keep our relationship..
even if its all fake and shit... its great.. because you with me
make a choice, you have 60 seconds melvin what will it be?


What do you think I will choose? [/whipped]

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Old 03-24-06, 11:14 AM   #2
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Your wife.
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Old 03-24-06, 11:15 AM   #3
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Rofl

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Old 03-24-06, 11:18 AM   #4
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lmao............very big imagination but yea your whipped so nejla will have you at her control. yep, so after those 60 seconds, you'll be like, oh yeah, nejji, i fuckin love you!! lol. very nice idea tho, it's real funny and interesting to read. oh and read your damn pm's foo!
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Old 03-24-06, 11:21 AM   #5
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You asked a question at the end; I answered it. Your wife, ____ Now if you want me to finish that statement just ask.

The storyline is great, kept me on my toes... especially the "yiggity yack yack yack yack yack" part, after that it got interesting, the flow was nice for this, the taking turns portion was creative and wow @ you putting Kevin and Chris in the storyline... very bold but uhm, other than that the content is fine and sounds great. Anyways, like I said pick your wife... Sounds better right?
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Old 03-24-06, 11:23 AM   #6
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THanks for the feed. Now am I blocked or are you just not on aim?
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Old 03-24-06, 11:26 AM   #7
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You've been blocked since that day, but you are very welcome for the feed.
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Old 03-24-06, 11:28 AM   #8
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.......bogus....


now everyone leave feed on Ink's OM
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Old 03-24-06, 11:31 AM   #9
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Not bogus. You act like you haven't blocked me before because you were mad, but uhm you'll be fine. I don't even have much time to be online anymore, you already know this tho. Matter of fact, I should be bouncing right about now.
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Old 03-24-06, 04:39 PM   #10
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wait... wut?... did that really happen?? werd
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Old 03-24-06, 07:33 PM   #11
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damn, son, that was actually pretty dope. you should unblock me tho, since I got some shit to tell you =/
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Old 03-24-06, 09:28 PM   #12
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Old 03-26-06, 05:33 AM   #13
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this was pretty ill...

the part i didn't understand...is you said...


"when you perrish..the illuminati is dead"

and that's nejla speaking to you correct?
but you're not illuminati..her father is..so if you die...
how is it that the illuminati dies, when her father is luminati...
maybe i read somethin wrong, or ddin't pick up on something...
or maybe thats why you said this didn't make sense...if it does though..

explain it my man



besides all that...it was definately thought provoking..and you can get an idea for the situation..and how someone reacts to some shit like that......a lot of quotables in there too...


if this was a little more clear to me(probably my fault) and was a little more pollished as far as story line(i know you didn't try as far as that)

it might be one of the coolest pieces i've read in a long time


rtf on "I am God" or my diss to paranoid...or both
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Old 03-26-06, 11:21 AM   #14
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lmao oh that part was simply me fuckin around and saying that the only reason the illuminati exists is to stop me from being anything. And I will now
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Old 03-26-06, 11:24 AM   #15
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ahh i get it now...thanks for clearing that up
shit is still dope though
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