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03-12-06, 01:50 PM
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Semper Fi
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By Any Means Neccesary
IP: 0825 899A
[Chorus: Young Dollar] I do what I gotta do to get on this grind Whatever it takes to put peace at ya mind I know these streets can be very scary But i gotta do what I gotta do... By any means neccessary Im gonna see that one of us survives And Baby you know I gotta sacrafice... [Verse 1: Young Dollar] You know we come accustume to the lives we dwell Thats why we claim that life is so beautiful ............Even though we all be living in hell Staying out in the streets workin minimum wage Tag on the time for jail and add it on to our age Just to find out we aint hustlin for better days Just to get stuck in a cage...but yes there are chosen few The ones who see it threw, but...sadly couldn't see it wit his crew Got out the hood and bought the mansion in The Hamptons Minds bubbelin in the minds of the feds of what happenin Like how the hell dis nigga quickly raised up his y-axis On the status of the money making with no 9 to 5 ............Could it be glitch in the system Or just that got off on his grind and had his chance to shine Nigga try to find boo on his avenue Try to understand the proccess of becoming a man Even though there wasn't one in his life to guide em by the hand Now he sittin thinking he living life at the top as the best Only to get smacked right down by the feds and the I.R.S. [Chrous: Young Dollar] I do what I gotta do to get on this grind Whatever it takes to put peace at ya mind I know these streets can be very scary But i gotta do what I gotta do... By any means neccessary Im gonna see that one of us survives And Baby you know I gotta sacrafice... [Verse 2: Young Dollar] Lets get it straight, dont consider me no gangsta Yes I sin up in these streets, hustlin for these intergers But evil in the mind body in soul just like a sinister Got prayed for in church and shooked up the minister Blew his mindframe, and quickly prayed to his name Damn...Competitive in this game can make nigga evil in the game Even at my age, I carry on with the rage,carry on with the gage Carry on with the devil plans so he can move on to the next page My whole life I thought I was in it for only myself Not aware to the fact I was doing evil for someone else I using these evil spirits to get me out of the hood Then thank God we everything rollin all so good Even though he has nothing to do with it Watches us live life and let us see what we'll do with the script But yet so many carry on, Not know whats going on Till what time we have is almost all gone Realising our depts are very hepty But try to pay em by any means neccessary [Chrous: Young Dollar] I do what I gotta do to get on this grind Whatever it takes to put peace at ya mind I know these streets can be very scary But i gotta do what I gotta do... By any means neccessary Im gonna see that one of us survives And Baby you know I gotta sacrafice... [Verse 3: Young Dollar] Ra'Neecia better realise that your my boo Let a nigga realise the consequences for fucking with you Cuz only the Devil and God know what I will do God witnessing my reaction to the action in here While the devil whispereing in my ear, got me drivin from all fear Only gun at hand thinkin i understand whats about to happen to dis man Till im at that breaking point, do i go shoot right past it Or do I fix it and just ride right past it Option 2 I choose leave behind all the money and the crews Realisin its times its around for me to make a new But damn i got 17 years of karma thats commin back on me Maybe alittle bit mite just fall back apon you So do i let you willing ride by myside, You and I Or Do i choose that the love of my life i must loose Damn I wish all these decisions will just remain gone Finaly comprehending that i rather die slow and alone Than for my baby to be not be happy in my home Not even safe tucked between my arms Push you away into the enternal sea of life to be lost Praying the same will be from my self made chaos Take my last breath a few moments after i take my last puff I told the world I smoke till i die man that shit wasn't no bluff Damn...no told me the pain of breath meeting your death And threw my last moments of misery what do I see Only you and mean in the happiest of my memories God finaly lets me rest, grants me to heaven cuz i did my best Satifisfaction in me cuz you i protected you by By any means neccessary
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03-12-06, 01:58 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2685974
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2685982
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03-12-06, 03:14 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: F5DE 026A
Shits hott be lookin for me on the remix its going down
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03-12-06, 06:29 PM
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I Chill in Asylums
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IP: 9133 A552
This was nice man, defenitely feelin it. Everything was pretty good in this piece, i really didnt see anything wrong with it. Nice drop man keep it up, please rtf on anything in my sig. Thanks and Peace.
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03-12-06, 07:41 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 2AC4 AAB0
This was fucking wack !!!
The chorus was bland and shitty, not to mention that the last bar didn't even fucking rhyme. Ya know, I don't know about you... but where I come from survive and sacrifice DO NOT rhyme. The verses were total bullshit, half the crap didn't rhyme but then I don't have time to quote all of the non-rhyming bars. The idea for this piece was wack because it is just the same old shit that has been done a million times before....come with some fucking originality why don't you. The rhyming was basic as hell throughout... well when shit actually rhymed. Overall, this piece was bullshit and not even worth this feedback. But... considering I have written it all, I'll leave it. And fuck you if you don't like criticism. 
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03-12-06, 08:22 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
actually dumbass the rhyme scheme was done in a AABCBC Scheme you fucking dumb ass. And i made rhyme. Dont start fucking bullshiting with me just because That fucking wack OM was exactly what the title said it was. You aint nothing but a damn hater kid. Shit When a nigga try to change up rhyme schemes some fuckin dickhead always gotta come around with a chip on his damn shoulder. Anyways Upping And thanx for the feedback.
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03-12-06, 08:23 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Also i made this under an hour while working on the fucking Remix ya dickhead. Go drop a real OM instead of bitchin in other niggas threads.
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03-12-06, 08:24 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: F5DE 026A
*owned*............
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03-15-06, 06:40 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 8DD6 877D
this was ok.... sacrafice and survive can be made to rhyme, if said correctly.....some bars do need a bit of fixing. overall this was pretty good. the rhyme scheme did have it fall off on flow at parts, but it might be the beat your using or how you flow. the content was ehh....pretty average, but it wasn't bad. keep it up
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03-15-06, 06:42 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 3240 794D
lol i know i fucked up on this one. IF YOU SEE THIS SKIP IT AND GO TO THE REMIX.
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