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Old 03-16-06, 02:23 PM   #1
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"Till Sunrise"...Crazy crazy banger...You WILL bop your head to this...MIXTAPE TRACK

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Word...everybody I've showed it to so far loved it, so I thought I would post it.

Verses: Ennui
Hook: Ennui
Produced By: Ennui

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Old 03-16-06, 02:32 PM   #2
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Did I say I loved it? lol...maybe

Listening officially...

intro to the beat sounded familiar

Beat is kinda coo...slick soundin

When I listened to this through my speakers, the bass sorta drowned your vocals out. It wasn't too bad though.

I like the flow to the beat. I would up the delivery though by maybe adding some inflections to the rhyming words. Emphasize them.


*still waiting for the hook*


K...think this is it...not bad there...But, the delivery is the same as the verses = adequate at best, lackluster at worst.


After a while, the beat wears on you. This would be a good intro song...Come on for 1 minute and then fade out...Listening to this beat for over 2 minutes becomes tedious.

Good track though overall
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Old 03-17-06, 12:06 AM   #3
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Thanks for the feed...

Damn at how bad this is getting slept on though.

Uppin'. I will return the favor.
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Old 03-17-06, 01:21 AM   #4
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its really repetitive catchy but get annoying.. bass drowns your vocals out.. nothin standin out
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Old 03-17-06, 01:27 AM   #5
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its really repetitive catchy but get annoying.. bass drowns your vocals out.. nothin standin out


Yeah I realized the bass really drowns the shit out when we put it in my friends' system today. Couldn't hear a damn thing...just bass.

But word, thanks for the feed. At least you weren't hatin.
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Old 03-17-06, 06:19 PM   #6
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listenin...

...this is kind of an original feel, which is good....i can tell that already that this beat is gonna get annoying, lol...vocals is a little hard to hear...tiem for the positive...good flow...lyrics are decent...im likin your delivery tho....you got a nice concept in mind, htis song is good but i feel like it could be great if it was on a different beat...overal, notta bad track tho...keep it up man

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Old 03-17-06, 08:52 PM   #7
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I like this, but you need to switch it up cuz it's starting to lose my attention. It is catchy, but to a point then it becomes boring. Lower the beats volume so the bass isn't so hard. This is a solid track, just lower the beat and mix it up a little and I'd bump it.
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Old 03-18-06, 04:51 AM   #8
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Word, thanks for the feed, I will hit up that link.

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Old 03-21-06, 04:18 PM   #9
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