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For those who cant get this line..
Im desposing your rhymes like bodys in the waitaks
The waitaks is a forest near here were body's are found daily.

kthnxbye

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2704477
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225397

first thing I realized is for the first verse you coulda stepped in earlier cuz I was gettin sick of the beat. um your quality is very weird, sound very monotoned (behind the beat) idk but you did but it sounds wierd. the lyrics were good and the flow was pretty solid man. delivery isn't to bad, could use work. your weakest point as of now is the quality, learn that shit man. 1

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Ight,sorry about that.
Played it on lo-fi instead of hi-fi.

So,yeah..

Like I said,the beat sounds all right.

The flow sounds good.Content as well.
Shoulda started off a little sooner though.

The quality sounds a little outta place.Don't know how to describe it.But it does.

It also makes the delivery sound intense-like.Making you sound mad or pissed off.
Or maybe that's just me..

Aahh well..

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flow seems good, lyrics are hard to make out at times but overall its a solid track

iite....listenin.....

.......quality could be improved, damnf irst verse was really short, decent flow....it would be really dope on a different beat but this fast flwo doesnt really match the beat nah mean?.....good lyrics....after second verse, it sounded like the entire song got silent for a split second, lol.....but yea overall, i think this would be alot better on a different beat, but lyrics and emotion were good fam.....keep it up

Listening through what I always listen through

The beat is nice, but sounds mad lo-fi. The instrumental intro went on pretty long, you should have been speaking this in this time.

Your vocals are too loud, especially in stereo. They come in too suddnely and phase out again like the insturment intro was, and to be real I didn't make out much what of you said in the first verse, and then boom the hook was up again. EQing man, EQing is badly needed. Turn your highs up and mids up, and your vol WAY down, like 4-5dB. even sounds like you clipepd slightly on the "let that goooooo" on the outro to the second verse.

The lyrics seemed on point, but personally I think you should have taken your excitement down a notch and still kept all the emotion in the lyrics by turning down your vol in the headphones a little which would have naturally brought your voice down to level it out, would have matched the emotional pace of the track a little better. And EQ!!

Yup. Peace

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word, thanks .