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03-11-06, 03:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3547352
yea..i only went to T....don't like it...finish it..damn...gota b BOREDDDD to do this shit man http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684964 Ecko http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2684983 chief
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03-12-06, 12:35 PM | #2 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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holy sheeeeppp shit
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03-19-06, 01:12 PM | #3 | |||||||
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holy sheeeeppp shit
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03-23-06, 11:03 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 05CC A0B1
Honestly kids really need to listen up to this track cuz its ill as hell ...the concept was dope and the attemp was even better
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03-23-06, 05:56 PM | #5 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: 8CF3 5E15
thx man...good looks..i proly jus drop wayy to many trx at once
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03-23-06, 07:30 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 64CA 6C26
heard this in production...was impressed by it...def. worth a peep
You decided to literally use all words with a certain letter...I wouldn't have minded hearing a few "a"s and "thes" in there to balance it out though...as it stands, you drop lots of fragments and single words...I could stand for a united theme good creative drop though... Makes me wanna attempt it 1 |
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03-23-06, 07:42 PM | #7 | ||||
I Got Money In Tha Bank
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IP: 257A 873C
deffinately a tight track, shoulda gon to Z but that woulda made ti dope beyond reasoning
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03-23-06, 07:51 PM | #8 | |||||||
tha illest
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IP: E162 B26E
hmmm i think that i heard u flow this concept in a yahoo cyph one time w/ oyd n shit. yea ive heard this concept alot so im not givin u no points on originality, that blackalicious alphabet arobics is tha illest tho... lol back to tha point, this track.... flow is aight, i dunno if this was tha best beat for it, seems like ur tryin to fit ur bars in real fast. def would sound better without all tha adlibs, or just turn them down, cuz it sounds fresh wen theres no adlibs, but then wen they come in it half annoys me. shit is aight tho.. it just seems like ur sayin a bunch of words tho instead of tryin to m ake a story or sence ya know. but that mite b tha point, its pretty tite at that jokker part lol... yea its def pickin up, the l's were nyce... m's aight.... kinda fall a lil to me at the end of the m's and into tha n's damn this shit is long lol watchu do like 6 bars for each letter? sumtimes ur rime scheme reminds me of rugged man lol but trust thats a compliment. w/ sum work this shit could b tite... y u stop at t tho? u couldnt think past that.. seems like u just gave up at the end man.. i dunno this was aight to me, nothin really wowed me tho. but with sum tweaking it could b real nice just drop those adlibs or fix em or sumn
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03-23-06, 07:57 PM | #9 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: 8CF3 5E15
thx man....actualy i worte this a while back n diddnt realy have time to finish it while i was recording............
but thx ppl 1ne
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03-23-06, 08:46 PM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: D3CA A17D
personally i think this concept is played...i've seen too many people try to do it or do it poorly...this was a decent track coulda been done better but let's face it you're no papoose who did the shit perfect...i'ma give it a 7/10...you did a decent job don't get me wrong
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03-23-06, 08:52 PM | #11 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: 8CF3 5E15
yea..........like i said i wrote this a while back..after pap but b4 most others...and jus seen someone do it text so decided to record mine...
but thx
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03-24-06, 03:36 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
lsitenin....
....damn this would be pretty hard to do, so rpopz for attempting it....i agree, you would have to be bored to do it, lol....flow is decent...of course the lyrics are nice, their in alphabetical order! lol.....but yea diope drop man, keep it up |
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03-27-06, 05:44 PM | #14 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: 8CF3 5E15
thxxxxxxxxxxxxx ppl
and rey...i cant listen to shit till i get my net at home up [new appartment] but i'll hit that up wen i can
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03-27-06, 05:54 PM | #15 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 4E71 78C5
this is a pretty terrible attempt at an already played subject, seriously flow is terrible, voice isn't interesting, its just hard to listen to, i turned it off...brutal
BRUTAL reverb makes me throw up on this too
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