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03-27-06, 03:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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woird illest verse I ever wrote, and prolly that you ever saw
IP: 246D 7E9E
It's - the - return of the Prince, the boss
this is real hardcore, Kid Rock and Limp Bizkit's soft sip criss, get chips, wrist gliss, I floss stick shift look sick up in that boxsta Porsche with the top cut off, rich kids go and cop the source they don't know about the blocks I'm on and everybody wanna know where the kid go, where he rest at? where he shop at and dress at? know he got dough, where does he live? is he still in the bridge? does he really know how ill that he is? got all of y'all watchin' my moves my watch and my jewels hop in my coupe, dodge interviews like that It's not only my jewels, ice anything, plenty chains Look at my tennis shoes, I iced that Who am I? the back twister, lingerie ripper automatic leg spreader, quicker brain getter keepin' it gangsta wit' ya word son i'm ill
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03-27-06, 03:08 PM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Gods son
*holds fist high* |
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03-27-06, 03:16 PM | #3 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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honestly I like the middle of the verse the most. I didnt like the 2nd line for an openner. those two(kid,bizkit) is dead. I liked flow of things, u had some decent stuff, I did'nt understand the bridge part though...I guess either your a troll or you str8 out lived in queens befor, Im not sure. it seems like this aint your style of rapping cuz I got the feeling you ran out of material a bit befor the end. but this is just my opinon. check out my audio and holla back at me and let me know wat you think of my favorite song "here that click clack". the link is in my sig.
I give your verse a 4.5/10 nothing personal... |
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03-27-06, 03:22 PM | #4 | ||||||||
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IP: 246D 7E9E
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^ROFL word, son. I feel you..... I'll def make sure my next song is better. It's called "Made You Look" will be a classic
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03-27-06, 03:25 PM | #5 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 246D 7E9E
here you go yo, I found it in my rap archives:
Uh, uh, uh, now let's get it all in perspective For all y'all enjoyin' it, a song y'all can step wit' Y'all appointed me to bring rap justice But I ain't Nas tho, y'all know it's SPuL yo Grey goose and a whole lotta hydro Only describe us as soldier survivors Stay laced in the best, well dressed with finesse In a white tee lookin for wifey Thug girl who fly and talks so nicely Put her in the coupe so she can feel the nice breeze We can drive through the city no doubt, but don't say my car's topless Say the titties is out, newness here's the anthem Put your hand up that you shoot with, count your loot wit' Push the pool stick in your new crib, same hand that you hoop with Swing around like you stupid, king'a the town, yeah I been that You know I click-clack where you and your men's at Do the Smurf, do the Wop, Baseball Bat Rooftop like we bringing '88 back
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03-27-06, 03:29 PM | #6 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
i got second verse for you bro
This ain't rappin, this is Street-Hop Now get up off your ass like your seat's hot My live niggaz lit up the reefer Trunk'a the car we got the streetsweeper Don't start none, won't be none No reason for your mans to panic You don't wanna see no ambulances Knock a pimp's drink down in his pimp cup That's the way you get Timberland'd up Let the music diffuse all the tension Ball or convention, free admission Hustlers, dealers and killers'ca move swift Girls get close, you'ca feel where the tool's kept All my just-comin' homies, parolees Get money, leave the beef alone slowly Get out my face, you people so phoney Pull out my waist, the eagle fo-forty damn i got creative. |
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03-27-06, 03:31 PM | #7 | |||
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damn1!!!!111 .
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03-27-06, 03:33 PM | #8 | ||||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 246D 7E9E
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^yea, son. we should like make an OM and shit with this nah mean son?
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03-27-06, 03:36 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 5285 DC82
Wait and see what EyeDentdy thinks of my verse first, he seems to know his music
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03-27-06, 04:24 PM | #10 | |||||||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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i liked it wen Nas sed it, but sumhow, wen SPuL sez it, its wack, hmmmm, werd
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03-27-06, 04:27 PM | #11 | ||||||
Above Originality
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Damn.........sick.........shit..............hot... ........fuck!
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03-27-06, 04:28 PM | #12 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
eazy E cool guy wrecked the fun
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03-27-06, 05:10 PM | #13 | ||||
In ya area.
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Psh, I wrote this track called "The Takeover" and it skeets on your whole career.
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03-27-06, 05:10 PM | #14 | |||||||
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Whenever Spul posts a verse in Anything goes... its never his like that battle he copied for a prank sorta
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03-27-06, 05:11 PM | #15 | ||||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 246D 7E9E
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Son, don't make me bring out the ether on your ass.
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