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04-03-06, 03:02 AM
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Uppin' the Stakes
IP: 9C2B 06EC
the self titled track for the mix tape we workin on....its not the final draft but wanted to get feed on how it sounded...i was just fuckin around on the end but yea thats how its supposed to kinda go
my man keef on 1 im on the second verse...and then im fuckin round at the end so hook me up with some feed Uppin' the Stakes - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3735913 linx - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225552 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225534
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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04-03-06, 12:20 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
anyone? any love????
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-03-06, 03:11 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: D3CA A17D
listening.....lyrics could be improved a lil bit....flow is good...i'm not feelin the emotion here though....get hype on the mic (that's what i always say lol)...overall not a bad track...7/10
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04-03-06, 08:13 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 7C71 7BD2
First Dude - Your flow on this sounds a little too mechanical. I think it might be your quality though, cause I can hear the influxes in your voice, but it still sounds monotone. You should play around with the Graphics Equalizer while your vocals are playing so you can hear the shit change your voice and shit.
Jay 286 - Yor shit wasn't bad. It had a few monotone spots, but overall it was pretty good. Flow was alright. Not bad man  ™
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04-03-06, 08:40 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
playing.
beats ok, first verse is ok,vocals a bit low,lyrics ok. Emotions slightly lacking. Ok flows, lyrics start to get beneric and verse gets boring. Second verse is ok, vocal levels are good, lyrics are ok, nothing mind blowing, flows good . not feeling the "similier to pac similier to jay Z, blah blah shit. ok track. |
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04-04-06, 09:35 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
uppin....for more feed...hit me up
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-08-06, 05:29 AM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: 7996 9D6E
betas iight..
this an't u is it??? ehhh anyway,,this dudes hot man....from front to back.. ok..this sounds more like you...flows nice man..emotions good n shit..presence n all is solid... lol..all i can say is u said tight to many times...other then that was a hot track all the way through
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04-08-06, 04:06 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
haha i said tight 3 times...oh well thanks...ima hit up your shit pretty soon
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-08-06, 04:31 PM
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IP: E8B4 945F
this is a dope beat i got this one downloaded..first guy had a good delivery he sounds like he's scared.i guess he just lacked the emotion.. he had a good ass verse good flow and dope lyrics...a few parts where a lil off....same with you had a good ass delivery it just seemed like it lacked something...i love some of your lines that one with the killa ass only line.... it was dope... you shoulda put a hook on dis or somthin good shit...
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04-08-06, 08:59 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
1st cat hmmm he has a nice voice, his delivery is decent. Flow was the worst part about his shit, he shoulda went faster to sound better. The lyrics were alright but not my style of writting at all.
Jay hmmm you have a nice voice, if you also went a bit faster it'd sound dope too. The lyrics could be upped a bit more. The delivery was decent for the most part. The ending of your verse with that hook soundin outro was kinda queer man. lol but it's straight rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805
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04-08-06, 09:24 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
yea that hook outro thing isnt on the real track....this was the first cut, n i was fuckin around...your right it did sound gay...hah
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-10-06, 09:31 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
anymore love???
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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