http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3766050
^Try an click Lo Fi. For sum reason on my mp3 player the Hi Fi version is like a second delayed. Lo Fi is right on Key.

Here are my links.
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2715522
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2715530


also. more track @ www.myspace.com/jet21 -1

i didn't think the intro was necessary....anyway....

lyrics are so so the beat does deserve better lyrics but the flow is good....i like the beat....the track is really lackin emotion...lyrics need to be upped and a lil more emotion and you'd have a decent track....6/10 keep droppin em

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www.myspace.com/eastsyde34

www.soundclick.com/eastsyde

www.soundclick.com/djeastsydeaka007

yeh u suck. ur opinion doesn't matter. stay out of my threads.

.....this is why I can't leave honest feedback. cus I hurt these kid's feelings an they run right back to my threads with stupid shit.....blah.

word man...audio back...does that mean i get to win a battle...haha....
you flow on beat nice....the when i was 6 line..wasnt spectaular n seemed forced...listen to the song youll know what im talkin bout....your voice sounds flexed like your tryin to sound hard...could be the effects on the voice...track is short, oh well....the intro and outro were unnessiscary but i mean your not too far...work on ya voice or the effects on it but ya flow is coming along....not bad

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I'm not back in maryland yet where all my real equipment is. And If you listen on Hi Fi it sounds like I'm tryna sound hard....it has like a second delay in it. Listen in Lo Fi.

But yeh when I get back up north u can have that win.
Because I could drop like tupac on this site and still lose.

thats cuz its east cost biggie style...everyone loves big more then pac man....haha....i did listen in low fi.. it might be the effects on ya voice man

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There Are No Effects On My Voice.

iite iite.....lyrics are good.....flow is decent...only thign is your pressence, try and have a lil more emotion....i wasnt feeling the intro and outro tho, wished it was longer, lol...but yea nice trakkk...

yo jet... where you from? sounds like ya got an Amercanized accent... you did kinda lack emotion... i felt what you was saying but i also felt you coulda been more effective by wording some things differently... sometimes it's not what you say but HOW you say it... beat was aiight... didn't really do too much for me... ya "s"'s stood out kinda strong in ya verse... quality wasn't too bad though... flow?... kinda iffy... not bad but not great either ... oh, and if ya did drop like tupac i'm sure you'd win some battles...lol ...but then, it'll be because ya sound like someone else and not "Jet"... what ya could do, though is use the same intensity that Pac used and actually sound like you believe what you spitting... you gotta make kats feel that you are actually going through it as ya say it, nah mean?

overall, it's an ok track... need to hear more shyt of yours... you been beefing with dudes about ya audio since i been here on RV and i prolly only heard 2 of ya tracks (including this one)

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