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04-16-06, 09:35 AM
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LBL Championship Match: Jay Cee (3-0) vs Mimesis (3-0)
IP: 9378 C03C
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04-16-06, 09:49 AM
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IP: 4713 4443
let's keep it low...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2725728 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...751#post2725751 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2725777 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2725779
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Syndacates... nameplays against me are old... Last edited by Jay Cee : 04-22-06 at 07:16 PM. |
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04-16-06, 12:53 PM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
I'm going 16-20.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226581 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226579 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226577 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=272612 Last edited by Mimesis : 04-23-06 at 03:01 AM. |
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04-21-06, 12:01 AM
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IP: 86C3 07B0
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Mim's not a groupie? Psh, that's a fat chance... Read tha 1st quote- -Bitch is on my dick so much I thought I wuz gettin a lapdance... I beat rookies & newbs, send em back to day care... Yea we all start out wack, but Mim, why tha fuck did u stay there? U ain't a legend anywhere, so stop ur boastin son... Cuz ur verses are liked by nobody & also posted by one... I'm not jokin dude, for real, u'll get broke in two... Yea I wuz feelin u for a minute.....but then stopped chokin u... I can recycle against dude, cuz he got tha queerest flow... So this is premeditated murder, cuz I thought of these lines years ago... This newb'll never rock me, I can easily get rid of him fast... Peeps only call this guy nice cuz he stays finishin last... U can't match my skill, so u'll just feel tha pain sooner... Cuz u ain't never been sick off tha dome.....that wuz just a brain tumor... So I'll drop u son, I'm here to stop ur run... I'd tell u to curb ur enthusiasm.....but u already live in a box on one... This win's a breeze for me, u'll see tha beast in Cee... So if Mim has a leg up in this battle, its so I can rape him more easily... & I haven't tried yet, but this is crunch time see... I'll uppercut Mim so hard he'll end up in tha 1-2 punchline league... Peeps say we're alike but I fail to see any familiarity friend... Yea ur undefeated, but after I win, that's where our similarities end... So when I grab tha crown, I'll leave this kid tormented... Cuz when I said let's keep it low I meant ur win percentage...
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04-21-06, 12:19 AM
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IP: F673 1DF5
Alright. . I don't know any personals on this guy that aren't played. .
Whatever. Check it out, Quote:
You making requests. . faggot, when you fight blunders are seen But I'd respect your wish if your fuckin face wasn't right under my feet Dude, you shouldn't have fucking come here. . your spitting is soft And you're such a disgrace to RV, Robin Williams movie will instantly flop You're overrated as hell. . and in this match you will get wrecked hard So now you're in this April Event. . . .that'll only end up with you taking a death March Yeah. . you don't deserve this battle, fuck what you're saying queer I'd say this match is hogwash. . but I don't see your mom bathing here So that'd be false. . and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse Now this event doesn't make sense. . you crazy thinkin your ass is better Cause how's The Revolution Begin?. . You bitch, you've been trash forever No change . . and your women, the doors is what they had me toward . .With all the fat girls you get the movie will win every Academy Award That shit is gross. . but you're fucking homo too, and I'm droppin' gays You see enough Cox to take credit in catching Nixon with the Watergate And that's no joke. . I'll burn you here, kill you. . keep smashin' ya hoe Then I'll make sure the axis in your head. . . .cause I'm tired of graphing the amount of wackness you post You stand no fucking chance. . every limb, I'ma be takin' em off Dude your records on the line. . and I'm just here to hang up a loss YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED. . seriously, this dude is mine. . Though you are a utility to the league. . but it's just the seweage kind At least I'm a good fucking citizen. . while to wrap up, you're harmless Now I have one community service hour. . . .cause that's how long it took me to bag up this garbage Last edited by Mimesis : 04-21-06 at 12:31 AM. |
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04-21-06, 12:20 AM
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IP: F673 1DF5
Oh shit, I was typing my verse while you posted. . let me edit in 6 more lines really quick.
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04-21-06, 12:31 AM
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IP: F673 1DF5
Alright, upping for votes.
Good luck, man. EDIT: I don't want N.Tavarez voting on this battle. I don't even want him to post his feedback of the battle. |
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04-21-06, 12:42 AM
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IP: 86C3 07B0
how many times u gonna fuckin edit ur verse? u posted 18 mins after I did...u weren't even on when I posted...I checked...then u editted tha 1st time 2 mins later...now again 10 mins after...
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04-21-06, 12:44 AM
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IP: F673 1DF5
Uhh. . I logged on, I saw you were on. I started typing my verse. I posted. I saw you had 6 more lines. I edited in more lines. I looked back, and I had like. . 2 typos. . I edited them. I don't really see how it's that big of a deal. Nobody else is even viewing the forum. I was only planning on going 18, but you posted more. So, I edited in 6 lines really fast. I made a few mistakes in them so I corrected them. I don't see where the problem lies. .
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04-21-06, 02:54 AM
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IP: EBE6 A230
I'm not jokin dude, for real, u'll get broke in two...
Yea I wuz feelin u for a minute.....but then stopped chokin u... This newb'll never rock me, I can easily get rid of him fast... Peeps only call this guy nice cuz he stays finishin last... This win's a breeze for me, u'll see tha beast in Cee... So if Mim has a leg up in this battle, its so I can rape him more easily... & I haven't tried yet, but this is crunch time see... I'll uppercut Mim so hard he'll end up in tha 1-2 punchline league... vs. Dude, you shouldn't have fucking come here. . your spitting is soft And you're such a disgrace to RV, Robin Williams movie will instantly flop You're overrated as hell. . and in this match you will get wrecked hard So now you're in this April Event. . . .that'll only end up with you taking a death March And that's no joke. . I'll burn you here, kill you. . keep smashin' ya hoe Then I'll make sure the axis in your head. . . .cause I'm tired of graphing the amount of wackness you post You stand no fucking chance. . every limb, I'ma be takin' em off Dude your records on the line. . and I'm just here to hang up a loss At least I'm a good fucking citizen. . while to wrap up, you're harmless Now I have one community service hour. . . .cause that's how long it took me to bag up this garbage This battle was dope yo. Jay Cee came out with some pretty hot stuff, good punches but Jay I feel you didn't try hard enuff. Mimesis consitent the whole way through you did have a few lines that i didn't like much but you brought it back with some hot wordplay. Personally this battle was extremely close but I feel Mim had a better verse over all. Jay came but didn't drop hard enuff DOPE battle though. Vote - Mimesis
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04-21-06, 03:26 AM
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IP: 732F 1911
cant decide =/I beat rookies & newbs, send em back to day care...
Yea we all start out wack, but Mim, why tha fuck did u stay there? U ain't a legend anywhere, so stop ur boastin son... Cuz ur verses are liked by nobody & also posted by one... I'm not jokin dude, for real, u'll get broke in two... Yea I wuz feelin u for a minute.....but then stopped chokin u... This newb'll never rock me, I can easily get rid of him fast... Peeps only call this guy nice cuz he stays finishin last... vs. You making requests. . faggot, when you fight blunders are seen But I'd respect your wish if your fuckin face wasn't right under my feet Yeah. . you don't deserve this battle, fuck what you're saying queer I'd say this match is hogwash. . but I don't see your mom bathing here And that's no joke. . I'll burn you here, kill you. . keep smashin' ya hoe Then I'll make sure the axis in your head. . . .cause I'm tired of graphing the amount of wackness you post Now this event doesn't make sense. . you crazy thinkin your ass is better Cause how's The Revolution Begin?. . You bitch, you've been trash forever YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED. . seriously, this dude is mine. . Though you are a utility to the league. . but it's just the seweage kind overall - damn this is an upset. I dont remember min posting that good before. I mean I seen dude have a nice line here and there and shit. but dude had a few quotables here. I guess he really wanted to win this one. but yeaa. jay seems to have underestimated min while min came prepared and was more consistent with more quotables. cool battle though vote - Mimesis
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04-21-06, 11:42 AM
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Beginning Your Ending
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IP: 6074 9274
U ain't a legend anywhere, so stop ur boastin son...
Cuz ur verses are liked by nobody & also posted by one... I'm not jokin dude, for real, u'll get broke in two... Yea I wuz feelin u for a minute.....but then stopped chokin u... This win's a breeze for me, u'll see tha beast in Cee... So if Mim has a leg up in this battle, its so I can rape him more easily... vs You making requests. . faggot, when you fight blunders are seen But I'd respect your wish if your fuckin face wasn't right under my feet Yeah. . you don't deserve this battle, fuck what you're saying queer I'd say this match is hogwash. . but I don't see your mom bathing here So that'd be false. . and fuck a comparison. . your rhymin' is worse You'd think we were in Texas cause there Arno good lines in your verse You stand no fucking chance. . every limb, I'ma be takin' em off Dude your records on the line. . and I'm just here to hang up a loss YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS PLAYED. . seriously, this dude is mine. . Though you are a utility to the league. . but it's just the seweage kind I thought Mimesis won this very easily. He only had one weak line and that was the Revlution one. Eeverything else was solid. The hogwash line may have been a mum punch but it made me laugh all the same. Thats two good mum punches I've seen in as many weeks (Spits fishy one last week was dope) lol. But Mimesis just keeps getting better. I've no idea how the fuck he keeps reeling off all these good verses with lots of lines. He's just elevated like mad out of nowhere and took this easily. Jay Cee I was a bit disapointed with your verse to be honest. No offence, it wasn't bad or anything, but wasn't worthy of a champ match either. The chokin you line was very nice and so were the other two quotables but apart from that I didn't like much. No matter how well the homeless punch was worded it will ALWAYS be a homeless punch, ie one of the most played concepts there is. Don't use them. The 1-2 uppercut line was executed well but punch line league punchesare pretty played; I seem to be seeing a lot of them at the moment. But apart from that there isn't much else to say. Mimesis took this easily and just continues to impress in whatever league he's in. I'm not dickriding cause I used to hate the fuck out of him for that bitch move in the tag tournament, but I'm impressed by how much he's elevated since the 80 liner with JTR. Keep it up. V/ Mimesis |
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04-21-06, 12:30 PM
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
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04-21-06, 05:23 PM
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
dam..since that's a KO..Imma just leave feed on this shit man..Ion see how Mim won this..that's just me, but wow.
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04-21-06, 08:54 PM
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IP: 329A 17E6
wtf?
that isn't even the real Jay Cee. its a imposer. i got the real one on aim. he dont go on this site last time i checked. when he gets on ill ask.
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