STILL GET MY GRIND ON...

Big Breeze on First
Mark the Amazing on Second
J. Summers on 3rd and Hook...

Shizz is hot...

www.myspace.com/jsummersandbreezus it will automatically play

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2713555
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897

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southbeachmiamiho

Listening...

Beat is tight man. Hook is pretty cool, like some southern banger shit.

First thing I noticed is quality is lackin a bit...but Myspace does that shit I suppose.

First verse is nice, good flow, delviery, the works.

Second verse, good shit, no complaints.

Thirds verse is probably my favorite. I like the style.

Definitenly good shit.

Keep it up.

"Rainy Days (Last Stand)"

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Soundclick
NEW Myspace

O shit i've done a track on this beat......................
1st MC - flow is strate, lyrics fit the concept of song, delivery is nice, some hype shit rite here
2nd MC - Flow is good, delivery is good and all, but quality on both tracks could be upped........
3rd MC - came the best, delivery is nice, flow is better than second MC.....nice shit
Hook - gets point across and is pretty catchy.....
Overall it wuz a nice track.......

pz

~1~
Overall - dope

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dope..thanx ya'll........RISSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

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southbeachmiamiho

I don't like your style one bit......but I'll still critic it fairly.

J I like the way you rap, the way you write is not that cool at all man. I just hate kids that think they tough you know, be yourself man. your lyrics are weak, your delivery is pretty good and strong though. flow is pretty strong and your hook is pretty catchy.

Breezus
I didn't really enjoy your verse. Your flow was pretty decent but you lack delivery and the way you write just aint that great man.

overall this track is weak due to having a overall horrible influence to music.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

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thanx paranoid i'll peep dat shit.....................

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southbeachmiamiho

hooks tight bro....i jus used this beat to..hotness......

1st dude came in nice man...flows their but delevery is touchy....good quality n shit...lyrics is kinda basic but....thats how they do down south i guess...plus it fits the song

hooks nice man....

2nd...came in nice..dubs a bit loud but nicly placed...dude got a catchy style n shit....quality is iffy..badly mixed maby....flows nice...delevery is good n shit

hooks still nice....

nice come in...flows good n shit..delevery is nice...click click pop line was good...dubs is good ...like the office max line is good....they weight line was tight...emotion n shits tight too....no complaints here

good track guys

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

What's hot:
Beat...I think I used this before, or was about to...not bad
1st cat has a good flow...pretty stock
Hook is appropriately catchy, but needed better delivery
good "feel good" track

What's not:
Levels sound muffled...could be Myspace though...need to raise the (H)
Lyrics are pretty simple from the 1st cat
2nd cat's vocals need to have the Highs raised in the EQ
2nd cat's flow seemed forced...was not fluid

Overall: not bad fellas



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

thanx for da fizzeeed RISSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeee

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southbeachmiamiho

get up get up get up get up get up get up...................

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southbeachmiamiho

lazy lazy bastardz.......................................... ........

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