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Old 04-23-06, 01:49 PM   #1
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Tha HighLife feat. Tha #1 Gunna

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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...458&postcount=8


Hook = me & J Gunna
verse = 1st 8 bars is me... 2nd 8 bars jo gunna
hook
2nd verse = 1st 8 bars j gunna second is me

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Old 04-23-06, 04:37 PM   #2
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playing..
hooks cool.
first sector of the verse sounds a bit weird. good flow, but sound a bit robotic.
hook again is cool like it.
second verse flows a bit off at points, but its still cool, again the sound of your voice i dont liek too much.
second dude sounds cool again. he held this track down.
ok track.
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Old 04-24-06, 05:19 PM   #4
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I Like this beat,did you make it?

Hooks nice.

Gunna:Flows gettin better,deliverys upped but still sounds a lil robotic if ya nah mean?koo lyrics emotion needs uppin....ridin the beat well

Eckos on,much better delivery and flow,more fluent good emotion koo lyrics,feelin the presence yo....feelin how you flowin on it,you got a unique flow

Hook........

Gunna...pretty much the same,change up your rhyme scheme a lil more though.

Ecko..pretty much the same good shit

overall:koo track feelin it 8/10

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Old 04-24-06, 07:56 PM   #5
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RTF please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226539


What's hot:
quality/mixing
delivery on hook
ecko...ur flow is good, but ur delivery is what carries you, along with your voice
Who is this other cat on here?

What's not:
didn't remember lyrics in hook after I heard it
Lyrics are lackluster for the most part

Overall: Good sounding track that just leave a little to be desired lyric-wise.

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