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Check in by: 06-08-06 at 05:06 PM

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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-06 04:38 PM.

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-06 04:39 PM.

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cool...


now upping...

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Voted For: Yvonne

wow, this battle was real weak.... com'on guys I kno ya bothe coulda came harder... The reason I give it to Yvonne here, cause Apostrophe was mad predictable and he use all the gurl punches possible.... Yvonne started out like she was gonna say sumthing but ended it even worst than Apostrophe. I was dissapointed in this one fo real.... keep wurkin at it ya.... vote-Yvonne

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still upping this

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Voted For: Apostrophe

EHHH,battle but apos took this the whole blan blank line from yvonne did it for me gotta open up ya metaforic brain to write this shit apos took this kinsa eazy flowed decent to

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Voted For: Apostrophe

Shaking the rust off, slut show me some love..
you havent had a fresh bar, since u cleaned the local pub
You're a whore a cunt a skank, and I can bet..
You get fucked soo much, your feet have never met.
..vs.
nothing

Y.. yo u aint have an ounce of punch in ya whole verse.. aint any wordplay or anything witty... u tried a few personals, but its gatta be a punch wit some wordplay... idk what to say.
apo...
that tubes tied line was worded odd... and why would u want a dudes lip stick to ya dick?... anway still a few good bars.. how u get back into this and get in the lbl.. anyway u know my vote...pzz
return the fav on my battle vs. mc phil in front lines

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There's no way that Yvonne should win this..

Voted For: Apostrophe

Yvonne
stupid bitch with no life to live..if not then y's ur bio blank
he claims to be straight in a spit..wen his punches shoot blank
Whack.. 0/10
i push to ur knees n shit..so u'd feel my fisty heat up ur brain
but y do i gatta give d hit..when ur style causes ball strain?
Whack.. 0/10
faggot b sweatin on his palm thinking what lines wud give gain
its no use spitn so hard when wut u say's gonna bring u pain
Whack.. 0/10
of course u's untouchable n its a shame,cos on rv we dont spit at clowns
N as i get my grind on dis confused kid in dis round..plz c 2 keep ur face down
Whack.. 0/10

Total: 0/40 = 0%


Apostrophe
If someone said you were hot, trust me the dude lied...
&& you won't be sonning anyone, cause u already got ur tubes tied.
Good idea, weak set up.. 2/10
Get your makeup out, you better do it real quick..
cause i wanna see your lipstick..... to my dick..
[b]Whack.. 0/10
Shaking the rust off, slut show me some love..
you havent had a fresh bar, since u cleaned the local pub
Weak.. 1/10
You're a whore a cunt a skank, and I can bet..
You get fucked soo much, your feet have never met.
Whack.. 0/10

Total: 3/40 = 0.075%


Vote: Apostrophe

This battle was whack as fuck.

Voted For: Apostrophe

damn... has to be the worst battle i seen in a minute... i'm mad at apostrophe's color of text, cuz it took me an entire .763 secinds to highlight and read... Yvonne... no good punches... they were all weak... A... not much better.... last line saved u... the only decent line in the entire battle... step ur games up and keep battlin... and vonne, try not to over complicate ur punches... a couple looked nice, but were too long, and didn't flow right...

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