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Old 05-14-06, 10:35 AM   #1
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Old 05-14-06, 01:05 PM   #2
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It's that rematch. .

I'm going 20.

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Chrit vs. Jack The Ripper
Rush Lingo vs. Chris Stylez

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Old 05-14-06, 02:08 PM   #3
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yea.. i know. g/l dude.

20's fine, but i might even go less. coo?
busy week and shit..
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Old 05-14-06, 03:40 PM   #4
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If you post first, then sure. . if you don't have a verse posted when I'm ready to post I'm just going to go 20. However, if you post first don't make it too far under 20. I want to do more than like, 10 lines.
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Old 05-14-06, 04:17 PM   #5
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chea.. cool and shit.
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Old 05-18-06, 06:28 PM   #6
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I need a one day extension. So, let's just make it so both of our verses are due tomorrow 12 EST. You haven't posted yet so it shouldn't be a problem. .
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Old 05-19-06, 04:07 AM   #7
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'chea. good idea.

glad i just seen this.

lets make it ILL.
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Old 05-19-06, 08:50 PM   #8
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similarities?
Quote:
Originally posted by Mimesis. vs. Jay Cee
That shit is gross. . but you're fucking homo too, and I'm droppin' gays
You see enough Cox to take credit in catching Nixon with the Watergate

Quote:
Originally posted by Mimesis. vs. Untold @ RB's LLL
And here's a follow up. . you're gay so I'll just help you land some men. .
This dude deapthroats enough to cover up the Watergate scandal again

and this wordin seems similar..
Quote:
Originally posted by Mimesis. vs. Untold
You faggot. . whenever you see some dudes, you get hard but yo
Mencia for sex so much. . Comedy Central will pay you to start a show

Quote:
Originally posted by Mimesis. vs. Precize
You're fucking hopeless. . not on my level, you're getting sonned but yo
You'll catch so many Hits From The Streets BET'll pay you to run the show

youz a fake 'n liar and.. you flip to heat boards, 'n i just bring the iron man..
ur concepts are Dublin back so much.. they've become a real city in Ireland
retire man! i'm serious, when i paralyze, choke, gag and bound ya bitch
it's cuz i have to eat my vegetables.. and just can't quite put down ya chick
i'll recite the line, you got no life.. this lazy dyke won't work any harder
Mime is so much of a couch potato, he's an instant mash w/ out the water
your get'n fathered, make'n sure you can't see farther through your site
but that sparkle in your eye, is just the blade in ur face reflectin off the light
here ends your life, 'n your chick ain't nice.. shes an animal in the sack, alright
seriously shes a beast, to say the least, this bitch's barks worse then her bite
you know i'm tight, so hard on my nuts this sluts my slave 'n will never be rich
'n when i refer to ur maiden name, kid.. it's when your cleanin my crib, bitch
leave ur side split, open so wide you'll need a stitch to close it really tight
your family'll be mourning so much, they'll have to have your funeral @ night
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I'm getting hammered with work right now. I'll probably record over the 'Feel It In The Air' beat when I go to my dad's in a week and a half (cause that's when I get out of school), and so I won't have to work and I won't have school. . it'll be dope. I just don't want to rush it because I really want this song to be ill.

I'll upload that older verse that I did later tonight and send you the link to it. You can record over that whenever. It's not that great, but I don't really care.

this fag'll fail on his knees or bend'n over, if it floats ya boat, then let it sail
i'll understand why your working late, cause ur boss hammers u with his nail
mim's been derailed and you suck, but always being late doesn't seem fair
your so much of a bitch, you need more extensions than black chick's hair
'cat, i stab tracks, but our collabo, you can stuff it up your ass crack
cause i didn't seriously wanna record, i just needed something to laugh at

g/l, pz.
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Old 05-20-06, 01:49 AM   #9
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Lmao. . Nice opener dude. .

I beat you with those lines, like. . what? Two weeks ago? Lmao.

Okay. . I may have posted them again, but we still hate this herbs lines
I get props on the same shit twice. .
. .we just get tired of yours half way through the first time. .
Thanks for the props. . my punches'll expose you as being the worst, kid
So read it and weep. . and mimic what voters do after seeing your verses
In our last battle you bitch and moaned. . Haha, believe this guy's corny
You pulled every bitch move in the book. .
. .that makes War and Peace look like a bedtime story
Here's a follow up. . he's back to whining, so I'll swing till his pencil's dead
History does repeat itself. .
. .but you've bitched enough to make the whole school look special ed
Learn how to speak english too. . dude, I've been watching you rap. .
And you're not good; you're well. . basically the exact OPPOSITE of that
You're catching another beat down. . I don't care who you've beat, yo
Cause you'll host enough injuries to sell your body off as a reality tv show
In our last match I posted some dopeness. . now who says he rocks vets?
You posted my lines to set up a punch. .
. .while those punches already set YOU up to get flawlessed
Those lines beat you before and they beat your verse quick, and you're dead
This is the first verse I've posted. .
. .and the second time you've got your ass kicked in this thread
You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
I'm just tired of wasting time now. . I'ma be owning this dawg
Just by dropping a Met-A-4. . without writing any type of poem at all
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Old 05-20-06, 10:33 AM   #10
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i'll recite the line, you got no life.. this lazy dyke won't work any harder
Mime is so much of a couch potato, he's an instant mash w/ out the water

vs.

You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
In our last battle you bitch and moaned. . Haha, believe this guy's corny
You pulled every bitch move in the book. .
. .that makes War and Peace look like a bedtime story

Close battle, both didn't come out as hard as I thought they would. But none the less had a few good lines. Meta the verse was just dull, didn't have and oo's and ahh's the Opener I've seen it somewhere I think in this league. Mime decent verse came out weak but finished strong.

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Old 05-20-06, 12:05 PM   #11
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I know. . I had to rush my verse this week. .

Finals, work, etc.

Thanks for the vote though.
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Old 05-20-06, 12:21 PM   #12
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I'll recite the line, you got no life.. this lazy dyke won't work any harder
Mime is so much of a couch potato, he's an instant mash w/ out the water
your get'n fathered, make'n sure you can't see farther through your site
but that sparkle in your eye, is just the blade in ur face reflectin off the light

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n our last battle you bitch and moaned. . Haha, believe this guy's corny
You pulled every bitch move in the book. .
. .that makes War and Peace look like a bedtime story
Here's a follow up. . he's back to whining, so I'll swing till his pencil's dead
History does repeat itself. .
. .but you've bitched enough to make the whole school look special ed
You're catching another beat down. . I don't care who you've beat, yo
Cause you'll host enough injuries to sell your body off as a reality tv show

V/Mimesis But both came wit decent verse for a champ match meta you had some good lines but not to many quotables you had a inconsistent verse it fell off in many areas.Mim you had a decent verse seen better from you but you did have some good quotes you had a more consistent verse wit fresher punchs.
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Old 05-20-06, 02:43 PM   #13
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yeah, YEAH

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Old 05-20-06, 02:47 PM   #14
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youz a fake 'n liar and.. you flip to heat boards, 'n i just bring the iron man..
ur concepts are Dublin back so much.. they've become a real city in Ireland
mim's been derailed and you suck, but always being late doesn't seem fair
your so much of a bitch, you need more extensions than black chick's hair
'cat, i stab tracks, but our collabo, you can stuff it up your ass crack
cause i didn't seriously wanna record, i just needed something to laugh at

vs.

Okay. . I may have posted them again, but we still hate this herbs lines
I get props on the same shit twice. .
. .we just get tired of yours half way through the first time. .
Those lines beat you before and they beat your verse quick, and you're dead
This is the first verse I've posted. .
. .and the second time you've got your ass kicked in this thread
You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
I'm just tired of wasting time now. . I'ma be owning this dawg
Just by dropping a Met-A-4. . without writing any type of poem at all


4-3 v/mimesis

Didn't think it was an amazing battle, but it was a decent read, not much to say, you guys both came ok, it was close, mimesis edged it out
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Old 05-20-06, 02:52 PM   #15
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youz a fake 'n liar and.. you flip to heat boards, 'n i just bring the iron man..
ur concepts are Dublin back so much.. they've become a real city in Ireland
i'll recite the line, you got no life.. this lazy dyke won't work any harder
Mime is so much of a couch potato, he's an instant mash w/ out the water
leave ur side split, open so wide you'll need a stitch to close it really tight
your family'll be mourning so much, they'll have to have your funeral @ night

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Okay. . I may have posted them again, but we still hate this herbs lines
I get props on the same shit twice. .
. .we just get tired of yours half way through the first time. .
Thanks for the props. . my punches'll expose you as being the worst, kid
So read it and weep. . and mimic what voters do after seeing your verses
Learn how to speak english too. . dude, I've been watching you rap. .
And you're not good; you're well. . basically the exact OPPOSITE of that
You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
I'm just tired of wasting time now. . I'ma be owning this dawg
Just by dropping a Met-A-4. . without writing any type of poem at all


Decent enough battle, although I think that both could've come harder. Don't be fooled by the amount of quotables I pulled out, because practically all of them were only barely quotable. Its obvious to see from past verses from both that these were both rushed. In fact, the only two bars that I really liked were both the openers. I think that Met-A-4 had the better opener, but from then on his verse lacked a lot. It was a lot of average lines, and a couple just above average in between. Mimesis was pretty consistent with his verse... it wasn't hard-hitting like it generally is but it was consistent to the point that no line was really weak. Met's on the other hand had a couple of lines that I thought were just shit. No offense dude, but you know you can do a lot better.

Overall, Mimesis had the better verse... he came more consistent and had better punches.

V/ - Mimesis
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