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Old 06-10-06, 01:19 PM   #1
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Thumbs up ****New club joint from ya boyeeee***** "Move it Move it...holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Beat: Babage productions

Hook: Q

Verse 1 & 2: 2



Concept: club type joint Q-style



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Old 06-10-06, 01:31 PM   #2
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I feel that the hook coulda been deliverd differn't for the hook...iono it just didn't fit it..but it was kinna catchy......your lyrics and flow on the verse was good...overall this aint too bad....
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Old 06-10-06, 03:01 PM   #3
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lol.....Q on the club tip. Hook would be better if you came hyped up or something....maybe not....I dunno, just sounded like it was missing something. But this is good for what it is.....could definitely see this at the club
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Old 06-10-06, 03:29 PM   #4
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Qfizzle clubbin too damn much..lol hook was cool but not ya best but ya lyrics made it up for it....i had to bump this twice...i might even download it
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Old 06-10-06, 03:30 PM   #5
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^^hmm...yea


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Qfizzle clubbin too damn much..lol hook was cool but not ya best but ya lyrics made it up for it....i had to bump this twice...i might even download it



haaaa...does this hook suck that bad?


well, after listenin to it again, it does seem to be off somehow...ehhh

thanx for the nod tho





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the just want you to....threw it off.....

just you move it woulda fit better i think....you had ONE extra syllable in there.....i like it for a club song tho....you need to do come club..."ohh's" or some hype shit in the backround...but yea songwise it wasnt bad at all
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the just want you to....threw it off.....

just you move it woulda fit better i think....you had ONE extra syllable in there.....i like it for a club song tho....you need to do come club..."ohh's" or some hype shit in the backround...but yea songwise it wasnt bad at all



^^Man, lol...I grappled over that syllable all the while I was writing it.



I may redo the song and touch up the hook some.



remix maybe.



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oh id hop on the second verse in a heart beat....get at me
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i listend to this Q....and its fresh
i like the beat espcieally and you delivery..real club feeling...you do it up good here
different taste from you and it really does your justice....lyrics are there as well...
this track is muy picante on all levels
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preciate da feed


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this beat is fuckin terrible... cant beleive your proud of yet another generic club joint.

hook is wack, flow is ok but couple times it sounds robotic and n abit stop starty, meh i know i dont like you n all so ull call this hate, but this track is fuckin wack.

that being said, i know your capable of better, you just dont fit this track,,, one line i heard you stutter on aswell, meh not feeling this at all, lyrics are blah too.

ugh... go back to what u suit and stop being so fake, theres so many lyrics mentioned on that song that i know arent who you are.
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