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05-31-06, 04:04 PM | #1 | ||||
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Konvict feat. Phase One - I Ain't Takin A L
IP: CE4A 8494
Y'all already know, str8 fire nigga... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2756721 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228991
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05-31-06, 04:19 PM | #2 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 3BA7 496B
Nice shit man
First of all, I'm def feeling the beat. You come in with a good energy, it's been a while since I listened to your stuff and your flow has improved even more. Your pronounciation can be worked on here and there, especially if you wanna reach a broad audience. But you got the right tone for this type of track. Phase One, got excellent flow as well, energy is same as yours, there are a few differences between both of you but you go well together on a track. The hook was catchy as well so nice track y'all!
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05-31-06, 04:25 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: CE4A 8494
Thanks ma.......
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05-31-06, 06:09 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: B32D 3927
Uppin............
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05-31-06, 08:11 PM | #5 | |||||
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beat comes in, man I'm not into these synthed beats personally. Vocals could use more EQing in the lows to give em more basss you sound like a young dude on this. lyrics are mixtape-like. the hooks ok, reverb is a little too high. Phase one, heh, this dude always sounded like an fake jaymills to me so its tough for me to feel his style knowin its not his, last piece of a verse was similar to the first one, herd that kickin it with jesus punch a few times.
ok track, mixtape style of course. i think you guys should inject some new and differnet shit into your style and stand ou more as an artist. real talk as always 1
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05-31-06, 11:32 PM | #6 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 5262 5C6E
mannn, your gonna get on msn and send me this beat!!! please lol, this track is ill, damn you elevated since we first collabed, its incredible lol, damn,this track is pretty ill, holla if you want me on one of your hook, love phase one's voice, this track is dope, good drop bro, get on msn soon
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06-01-06, 10:23 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 12C8 9C71
damn yo, you got a dope ass delivery. word @ leavin with 2 ls like cool j. nice shit. 'need more tissue where his nose go' haah, gawd damn you ill as fuck. you got a dope ass flow. nice ass shit yo.
i dont like the hook cause it seems like theres too many vocals on it. its cool without that though. my boy phase, aint peeped em in a min. this dude is gettin doper with every track. flow cant be fucked with. this track was dope. lose some of the vocals on the hook and it would be near perfect.
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06-01-06, 11:57 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: A4A0 C80A
Thanks yalll..
Apexx I apreciate dat and word I need help with the mixin etc. ima try encorporate a couple more lows..and turn down the reverb next time thanks... Speats..haa my nig haa you know I got uu fam... Phluent..Thanks I apreciate dat fo real...holla atcha nizzle upp
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06-03-06, 11:32 AM | #9 | |||
OYD
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IP: 2B7A 2084
I cud hear hiss in ur vocals Inter
flow/delivery sound slick 2nd cat's vocals sound a tad too compressed... flow is good tho good soundin track liked it Hook...cudn't decipher some of what u said...but sounded creative 1 |
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06-03-06, 02:33 PM | #10 | ||||
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IP: D0E4 05DE
word thanks fam..........
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06-03-06, 04:40 PM | #11 | ||||||
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Quote:
word up man. peep the sig, somethin in there's gonna be gold to ya. 1
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06-03-06, 05:14 PM | #12 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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beat i like it
this is prob my fav track from u like ur delivery but like apexx said you could use some bass def working with the lisp on this hook is cool i like it in parts others i dont idk phase idk i dont really like your delivery for the most part kinda remind me of j kwon lol : / lyrics were cool thougth i think i would like you on some tracks
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06-03-06, 05:33 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 3A59 1080
Thanks ayo Apex, is there a link to your "sound better on tracks"?
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06-06-06, 04:39 PM | #14 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 115E FFA8
grow up leave legit feed stop hating
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