http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228620
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228713
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1st Verse - Scuba Steve
Hook - all
2nd Verse - Black Dragon
Breakdown - Ridikulous
3rd Verse - Woo, Ridikulous
Hook - all

Beat by VTZ

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'preciate any feedback......

pz

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1st verse ... beat is drownin ya voice..had some nice lines..flow fell off at times..nd the delivery was koo..should raise tha vol on tha vocals tho..

hook was ok i guess for tha beat..cant really understand tha lyrics tho..should fix tha quality

2nd verse..flow was koo till u switched up nd started spittin fast..flow kina fell off there..but eventually tha flow came back..lyrics was koo..delivery was pretty much there..again tha quality makes it hard ta understand

3rd verse..first niggas flow was ok..could hear u takin breaths in between bars..should spit a bar till u lose yo breath nd start a new track layer thing nd pick up where u left off 2nd nigga sound like u was dissin somebody..wasnt really on tha topic..but tha flow was str8..lyrics is ok..overall nice track..quality woulda made it better..

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'preciate da feedback.................

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verse 1- was alright nothin special. a few good lines here n there though. delivery was ok, you need some kinda swagger though

hook was str8, once again nothin special. a lil catchy though

verse2- dunno why but i dont like ya voice. that twista shit was just gay it like didnt seem natural n came in completely randomly w/ the transition. iunno, just ok

verse 3- nah, ya flow's kinda choppy. need some more confidence or somethin in ya delivery. lyrics were decent

eh, ok track

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