like sed above...i do like the attempt. Thnk u for having some sort of recording quality. jesus...i swear if i hear one more 'shitty mic' track on SC...ima committ suicide.

before i start commenting...wtf is that thing at 40seconds?

i like the beginning...i like the creative ideas u had in the song, very commercial type ideas...but good none the less. the flow was a lil off, and u do need to put a lil more emotion into ur delivery. u need more of a beat change for the hook...or at least some sort of vocal effect. the hook just blends in, which is #1 no-no in above-ground songs.

overall...i liked the song...listened to it a few times...u cud easily put a nice bridge (after the 2nd hook) in here...it wud really make it commercial format. work the flow a lil bit, an thats my only suggestion. keep up the good work.

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