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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
06-16-06, 07:05 PM
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I Hate You (need feedback, will hit urs up too)
IP: EECB F471
whatz up everyone. I finished this track a lil while ago, just lookin for some feedback. I kno the vocal levels are a lil off (no mix on it yet)...so keep that in mind. i wanna improve, and need feedback to do so. pref comment on spots where u dont like flow, ideas, lines, anything. also, try to name a thing or 2 u like...that way i dont go kill myself with all the negative vibe
 drop ur links and ill check u out too...pz, and thnx in advance www.soundclick.com/7curse links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229751 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229726
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06-18-06, 12:23 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 0A37 178E
alrite your voice is kinda rough idk its cool
beat is pretty cool hook is cool first verse is good no complaints you have good flow and really good emotion i mean really the only thing i coudl complain about is mixing and thats because its not done idk lol cool track. i ddint think i was goonna like it because of ur voice. however it fit the track really good after its mixed ill dl it. leave feed on any track that has oyd in the title
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06-18-06, 12:42 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2A9D B363
u do have a different voice........lol at da neva get lines.....ya flow is on point.......delivery is nice.......all i can say is work on ya mixin and quality......but it's decent.....overall nice track......
pz ~1~ rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229406
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06-18-06, 09:45 PM
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El Padrino
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IP: 0EB4 1ACC
lol
retarted like kids wit CP ???? LMAO!!!!!!!! peepin ... My Hip HOP.... lyrical content is dope as fuck!!! home boi.... Get at me..... OYD kiko!!!! you got a unique style... and you produce tracks??? i mean... you rough around the edges... but your lyrics are crazy... juss gotta work on delivery.. lol.... keep droppin.. but get at me.... OYD... we makin Moves kid!!! HOLLA
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06-18-06, 09:54 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
dont really like the song, but im really feelin the hitman beat.....
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06-19-06, 04:17 AM
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IP: EECB F471
Thank u for the feedback so far..and drop linx...i wanna hear what yall got too. also...Jay286...can u give me some reasons why u dont like the song? I cant improve if i dont kno what to improve on. thnx in advance. up
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06-19-06, 06:07 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 50C5 4B8B
Yo your voice is real different, has a raw element but it aint my preference nah mean ..lyrically this is amazing and superb..multis and all that is working..however..your ruthlesness is kinda going past that barrier which people would wanna hear well for me, but still I know people would like yo ish, your more for a concentrated audience and a specific vibe...and I feel what you saying, lyrics, flow, delivery all dope just dont feel the voice thats it...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230150 can you rtf
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06-19-06, 02:08 PM
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L.E
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IP: 4F84 8C0F
Listening...
Beat sounds interesting... You sound drunk on this track... Flow was good...it fell off a couple of times, but it sounded alright. Delivery is good. Lyrics are good....really good actually. I liked the one last bullet one last clip lines...good shit. Hit me up for a collab. |
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06-19-06, 05:56 PM
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IP: EECB F471
thnx guyz....keep wit the feed plz.
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06-20-06, 11:19 AM
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El Padrino
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IP: 0B4D 3AD5
to the Top 4 dude
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06-20-06, 11:25 AM
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IP: EECB F471
"to the Top 4 dude"
....huh?
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06-20-06, 12:59 PM
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El Padrino
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IP: 0B4D 3AD5
i was uppin your post for you man.... so you get more views....
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06-20-06, 02:11 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
i unno i think its your voice it makes things sound forced but when i listen i know they arent...i dun think its anything you could do better, im just not feelin it for some reason, if there is one think you can improve is your dubs, turn em down a lil or have them match up a lil better......i unno thats all i really can think of for improvement otherwise i im just not feelin it that much
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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06-20-06, 03:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: EECB F471
aight....thnk u very much Jay. and thnx Tito for uppin. u wanna collab tito? i like ur sound...IM me if u wanna. AIM: jaecurse
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