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06-18-06, 07:45 AM
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Beginning Your Ending
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The Hand that Helped me Fall
IP: D779 0F07
 The Hand that Helped me Fall Last known words of Azael, former prince of the watchers… In Heaven we lived, amidst consummate displays of affection Where even the worst of sections were still paragons of perfection W/ The Lord who made a range of diction depicted in the greatest pictures Ablaze with written saintly visions predicted in the Sacred Scriptures A song of praise encrypted with genius displays converging prior To the surge of Angels sacredly burning ablaze to emerge from fire We stood as light in the dark, shields of defence against infernal Shining w/ amaranthine ambience unrelenting and sempiternal Such was the life of an Angel, to serve in their deserved ascension To endlessly follow & never question the flaws of the Lords intentions And it caused dissension even paradise was a place of parasites W/ rage the disgraced would envision waste with their harried eyes And Lucifer… The serpent complete with a belief that God spoke with deceit With conceit he conceived the plan that left him broke w/ defeat Thy God be damned! Thy creator who stands corrupted and foolish The one would ask us to worship Adam... and is utterly clueless! My brothers burnish your rage, and unmake in an earnest display Since when doth the craftsman of fire start to worship his clay! Since when doth the writer clutch his pen in reverence kneeling Before the page, penitently bowing before his creation w/ feeling? Be free of thy chains my brothers! And In freedom absorb the fact That the one who would hold you for love… …Is the one who would hold you back! The heart of the Universe bled falling w/ tears of despair that were all ignored And with my hands soaking in the blood of Angels I sought the fall of the Lord Killing Guardians with an empty gaze, I watched all hopes of redemption fade W/ Lucifer I slaughtered the righteous and put and end to pretentious ways But Lucifer fell… & still envisioning Heavens waste with my harried eyes The true Lord confronted me and triumphantly cast me from paradise Yet Hell was the true Heaven, my name was spoken w/ prominence Feeding on the souls of the wicked I ruled w/ my brothers in dominance But such is the worth of brethren w/ their perception the worse was leavened They showed me it was better to reign in Hell… than to serve in Heaven In forgotten penitence I shed remembrance and answered to Satan’s Call Free of the past at last I became free and grasped the hand… …That helped me fall |
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06-26-06, 04:15 PM
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IP: 18CC 30C4
I haven't read all of this yet. But what I have read, seems very good, and entertaining. I'm not one to give out critiques to people, but I do have one for you, if you'll take it. Try not to be overly wordy. Sometimes it seems a bit pretentious, and may unkowingly, make people not want to read your piece. But this had good word usage and therefore made up for it. Very nice.
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