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07-10-06, 03:01 AM
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Blayboy - "Life Goes On" - MY HEART ON THIS ONE, STRAIGHT UP... EVERYBODY PEEP!!
IP: 085D 358C
www.myspace.com/bl4y
www.soundclick.com/blayboy song should speak for itself... links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231240
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07-10-06, 03:39 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
get a soundclick link. I cant play myspace
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07-10-06, 06:55 AM
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IP: BD45 6576
Listenin', beat is nice, I like the intro to it with you conversating with someone and the pianos are crazy...the intro/hook or whatever it is with the phone filter flow is a lil off, a nice effect but flow a lil off..now you come on..presence is real nice and so is delivery is great..flow falls in and out but still is decent..yeah hook's flow is all off fam IMO, it wuda been done much better if you did..
"You feel week inside" and then record seperately "Life Goes On" and Echo on the Life Goes On, and record in two layers and then put each on 25 to the R and L respectively.. If that makes sense nah mean it'll keep the flow and make a nice efect on Life Goes on.. Quality is nice..and lyrics are also dope..you can tell the emotion is real...im feelin' this track... 8.3/10
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07-10-06, 08:02 AM
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IP: 8CDA 6FCE
presence really shines with the verses. quality is pretty good. might be better to back away from the mic a bit when you need to take a breathe. voice is nice for sure... words are dope and i like some of the inner rhymes. helps the flow and all. emotion is almost perfect, just needs a little more energy. good timing and beat fits with what you wrote. got me noddin ~8.4/10
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07-11-06, 01:08 AM
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IP: 085D 358C
thanks for the feed everybody
uppppppppppppp.......
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07-13-06, 01:04 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: A161 2B2A
*listening*
soft soft...atmosphere of depression...ur voice just fit the whole thing..ur delivery was iight..lyrics were decent..flow was iight u just fell off at some spots like u were almost running outta breathe...i like the effect on the hook...this track is pretty cool..yup! hit my 'dear dad'
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07-13-06, 03:53 PM
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IP: 2B7A 2084
beat is better than how you flowed on it
I can tell you right now that you lack mic presence... How big is your dick son? Big dick = cockiness on track ^^my theory Rap like you got the biggest dick in da world man, even on a "tender" track like this. You're not coming off strong on track, IMO. Flow was alright Delivery was lacking...you need more breath control/inflections...Think Biggie Smalls...perhaps the best at it, IMO. Ur lyrics were personal = good You have potential man. Keep at it. RTF pls http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231557 |
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07-15-06, 06:14 PM
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IP: 085D 358C
updated with SClick link for those asking for it...
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07-16-06, 03:57 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: CE13 1C89
ummm u are to rtf...thanx
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