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07-09-06, 01:46 PM
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Broke as hell
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"Nothing to Give" (Brand New from Shear Kaughn)
IP: B8B4 D1AE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231325
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231235 New Track i cooked up.....check it out http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4163277 enjoy...
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07-09-06, 02:59 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
Congrats, your track gets feed using my new feedback system!
haa Here's an overview of the basic elements of your track using my rating spectrum: *************************************** Wack.........Needs Work..........Alright.........Good...........Dope __________________________Beat Choice -------------------------------------------Flow --------------------------------Delivery ---------------------------------------Lyrics In a nutshell: This was a solid track that was easy to listen to. If you focus on a more catchy hook, this would be dope. 1 |
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07-09-06, 08:08 PM
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Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
thanks Q bert....up up up side yo head
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07-09-06, 09:00 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
hmm time to use my voting system Production Alright production. Nice yo, i can see this on a mixtape for sure. The volume level is on key. Mixing. Good from my headphones. The beat is Hot!! some real emotional shit. an Ansane beat i see. Thats whats up. Everything was equalized. So vocals were on key. No flaws in this part of the song. Did you use adlibs? i don't even know. sick shit yo, production Rating 9/10 Vocals/Lyrics Now onto the vocals. The flow was fire! good for this type of track. You said your from the west? you have an E-40 westcoast slang. Shits still hot though. Im feelin it styll. the concept of this song is real deep. One of the hotter songs on this site. I thought mine and konvicts songs were FIRE. but i guess im wrong. Niggaz is really steppin their game up on this site. Your voice fits the beat. and you stay on beat the whole way through. Real nice shit Vocals Rating 8.9/10 Overall this shit was really hot in my prespective. Im really feelin this joint here Yo if you ever make a mixtape. make sure you include this. And we SHOULD get on a collab ya dig. bring that fiya to RV. whats up. Hot shit yo keep it up return the favour...link in my sig
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07-10-06, 10:48 AM
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Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
Q, kon...thanks for the feed back..much appreciated......but naw i'm not from the West, i fuckin wish i was though......i'm actually from Tennessee....Clarksville to be exact..same as Young Ike...
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07-10-06, 05:56 PM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: 50F0 9C51
OMG u are the second person to use a beat b4 i use it..wtf!
well yeah u flowed very very well..i liked ur lyrics..delivery was very much alright..u put in an okay emotion but just put a lil more and then it'd be iight!...and umm yeah i liked the line 'life is not a picnic'..that actually caught my attention...hook was yeah alright no toooooooo deep words on that but yeah completes the sense of ur track...umm whatelse?..nothing.. i'm liking this track but hating it for the beat  hit my sig if u havent thanx 
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07-10-06, 06:48 PM
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Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
haha thanks for the feed..and my bad on using the beat before ya.....it was too good a beat to pass up....but yea, i'll hit ya link....
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