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Old 07-21-06, 10:57 PM   #1
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Kontroverzy ft Taniesha - Im Dying/Hustlin'

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Kontroverzy ft Taniesha - I'm Dying/Hustlin'


Vocals: kontroverzy & taniesha
Lyrics by: Kontroverzy
Production: Yessur productions
Mastered by: Kontroverzy

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4216647&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4216647&q=hi

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4216647



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Old 07-21-06, 11:25 PM   #2
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singer is ok some parts where she sounds off key but pretty good
damn beat comes in maaaad loud lol
maybe tone that down a little
presence delivery is good
flow is really good
switch up pretty nice
really like this track
pretty good shit
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Old 07-22-06, 12:43 AM   #3
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alright thanx. i appreciate it ma. And welcome back
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Old 07-22-06, 02:24 AM   #4
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also the first track probably will go on the mixtape aswell
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Old 07-22-06, 08:03 AM   #5
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LMAO@ me hearin the intro..jus nice n soft..then i let my gaurd down..then..BOOM! heres the beat...nice song by the way
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LMFAO yeah yo. i appreciate it. famz.
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Old 07-22-06, 02:35 PM   #7
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What's hot:
your delivery is tight
Lyrics tight
flow, good shit

What's coo:
singing, had some good points and some bad points

What's not:
beat. lol iunno not my style man. iunno

but overall shit was a nice lil jam tho, man. f'real. good shit 8.5/10

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Old 07-22-06, 02:51 PM   #8
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appreciate it. I will return the favour in a few.
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Old 07-22-06, 03:29 PM   #9
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oh shit i was gonna use this beat ahhahah its up on yessurs page dammmn son peepin it now

I love this beat..its just FIRE ya feel

whats hotressense and emotion plus beat

Whats ok:flow and lyrics

whats not:quality is straight but needs a lil improvement!!!

Overall i like this shit tho...ur flow is a lil choppy in some spots tho.....

the singer is straight ya feel......just sounds like an avg. singer..its good shit......i'm feelin it...keeep it up

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Old 07-22-06, 03:31 PM   #10
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thats whats good..yeah the hook was a real simple part.....nothing fancy...she just did her thang i did mine..i appreciate it.
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Old 07-22-06, 03:34 PM   #11
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Old 07-22-06, 06:21 PM   #12
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shit my bad. i keep falling asleep. alright i will soon
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intro singin sounded like Janet Jackson at first


lol

feelin this beat

vocals mixed well...cud be amped .75 decibels


flow is good

delivery fits this beat

lyrics aren't bad

Hook sounds nice...would be even doper had you ad libbed it


is that a beat switch?...hmm

vocal quality seems compromised on this beat switch...

still slick tho


was feelin this production
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Old 07-23-06, 12:51 AM   #14
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thanks i appreciate the "Choppy" feedback bruh. Nice Shit
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Old 07-23-06, 01:10 AM   #15
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Shit thats Hot-

Presence was illy dilly yo...flow was of the heezy fo sheezy u elevatin like hot cakes neggggggaaaaaaaaaaaa..lol also hook was nice..like lyfe's song..lol

Shit that i didnt like-
the weird beat switch or its like that ..i dont know
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