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Old 07-16-06, 11:54 AM   #1
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39. Ouch (0-0) vs 40. Dae Killah Kaze (0-0)

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Old 07-16-06, 12:11 PM   #2
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Old 07-17-06, 02:26 AM   #3
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alright den...................
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Old 07-19-06, 10:43 PM   #4
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My technique starts out with you, till im killin da bitch
Call what you rap is sick, comfirms the results of da list
Only time you rap fire is when ya wrappin ya dick
I can tell ya cant spit of da top of ya head
But i can spit off da top of yours
talk about da face, da shape, and comfirm whats said
Even wit cheese you still get neglected by whores
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Old 07-20-06, 03:17 AM   #5
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washedup, damn has been, my flow kills neezy.
call this battle Eric Wrights son.. cuz beating you's jus a Lil Eazy.
you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me
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Old 07-20-06, 03:58 AM   #6
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you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me
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Old 07-20-06, 09:05 AM   #7
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you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

vs

My technique starts out with you, till im killin da bitch
Call what you rap is sick, comfirms the results of da list
Only time you rap fire is when ya wrappin ya dick

^ and that line was decent at best, couldnt really grasp ya style kid
and ouch was even all that but it was enuff to secure a win
v/ ouch
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Old 07-20-06, 09:26 AM   #8
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washedup, damn has been, my flow kills neezy.
call this battle Eric Wrights son.. cuz beating you's jus a Lil Eazy.
you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

vs.

Nothing

Kaze, just don't think your ready for this league. Your concepts, wording, and rhyme scheme all need some work. Maybe elevate somewhere else and come back when you've improvement. Ouch, verse didn't have much effort put into it, but it was still pretty good, I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

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Old 07-20-06, 09:48 AM   #9
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None.

vs.

you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

Do I have to explain...? Please don't even bother asking, just elevate. Thanks from all of us in the LBL.

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Old 07-20-06, 10:56 AM   #10
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NOTHING.

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NOTHING.


^ For real, this battle was pretty pathetic. I mean both you only went 6 lines each and still didn't manage to produce a dope bar. Overall, Kaze I think you need to get some practice in before stepping into this league. Your rhyme scheme is weak, your wording is weak and your concepts are played to fuck. Ouch, you didn't do much better but at least you had punches that were at least mediocre. That push up bra line was ok, but just not good enough to be quoted.

Overall, this battle was ass... Ouch clearly didn't try and Kaze just dropped wack as fuck.

V/ - Ouch
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Old 07-20-06, 07:02 PM   #11
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you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

vs.

nothing

Ouch = half-assed, but it worked.

kaze = just read some of the better battlers on this site and you'll pick up on grasping concepts and shit...just sign out for a bit and get better then come back....
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Old 07-20-06, 07:41 PM   #12
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think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

vs.

nothing

Ouch didn't try obviously, but still beat him with ease. nuff said

v/Ouch

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Old 07-21-06, 01:13 AM   #13
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you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

vs.

nada, zilch, zero, nothing

no explanation needed...

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Old 07-23-06, 08:50 AM   #14
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Ouch = Fake.

Dae Killah Kaze wins (1-0)
Ouch loses (0-1)
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