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04-21-05, 06:37 PM
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I see dumb people
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"Guilty Conscience 2" ft. SPuL and Indeph (HOT SHIT READ, yO)
IP: 2C61 869F
fashos, yo. This shit me and dpeh did. Yea, we took topic off of Em and Dre's shit, but still we wanted to do it. so here. Indeph was good side, and I was bad.  Me=purple, Deph=blueMeet Tommy, 16 years old. He is having a good time at a friends party. All of a sudden a drunk Sarah, who happens to be his best friend, Mike's, girl, comes over to him and starts flirting with him and throws herself on him. Tommy doesn't know what to do. Then, all of a sudden his conscience comes into play... now hold up, Tom, thats your boys girl there She ain't a peice of meat, man, she can't even think clear understand that people drink,take your things and jus leave, Cuz if she even cheat, It'll only lead to stupid beef Fuck, he don't want beef, remember Mike is vegetarian? Stop listenin' to Deph, he wack, practice unitarian Boobs like watermelons, phat ass, she a mini J-Lo "Tom, are you gay?", that's what they'll ask if your ass, says "no" don't listen to him, he want you to move in 1st cuz dude a virgin, he wanna see pussy move in person Look at me I'm jerkin', whoo-wee! wait, what you say? Fuck, man, i'd wanna see this bitch, no matter who she lay That's sick, Tom, you gon take advice from this crazy dude? Shut up bitch! Tom, think wit yo dick, that's how I do Fuck that, Tom, if she gets on you, jus push her ass down Hey, look! Mike is here, quick, lock the door, and fuck her now!! (chorusx2) These voices... these voices... I hear them... and when they speak I follow I follow... I follow... I follow Meet Logan, 16 years old. He is walkin' down a street, and sees a fine lady ahead of him. He is staring at her ass as she walks, and all of a sudden he notices a ATM card drop out of her purse. He tries to decide what to do, but before he can act, his conscience appears... Yo Lo, what the fuck, stop walkin', yo, you listenin? It's beggin' to be spent, look at it, man, it's glistenin' Pick it up, you need the money for your weed addiction Oh, wait, even better, what about that Porn subscription? Shut the fuck up! Yo, Lo, I hope that you weren't listenin what if you was in front of you, and you was in her position then? you don't understand...money don't always gotta be rushed I know for a fact you don't need it,but man, she probably does You're kiddin', right? look at the bitch, she prolly a prostitute Neck full of pearls, snatch the card, then go swap the jewels Jewels or no jewels...its hers, so face that Not only that, man, those cards are made to trace back So what? Go to your ex-girls house, and use her PC So now you dragged your girl in..that abuses each team Fuck who cares, she's your ex, dude, take the card!!! Don't, you're on your feet right now, the law will make it hard (chorusx2) These voices... these voices... I hear them... and when they speak I follow I follow... I follow... I follow Meet John, 38 years old. He pulls up to the driveaway of one of Jane's, his daughter, friends, who were holding a party. He wants to pick her up, because he fears something bad might happen to her. As he is about to ring the doorbell, he hears some noises coming from the woods. He can hear a young girls muffled scream. Startled, he goes over to check it out, and is horrified to find Jane's naked body covered in blood. He looks to his left and sees a young boy, named Paul, start to run away into the woods. Overcome with tremendous anger, John pulls off after him. The boy trips and falls, and John is able to catch up to him. He notices a bloody knife near the boys pocket. He picks it up, and holds the boy by his neck. Before he can make a move, his consciense kicks in.... Now don't do nothin stupid, and go lie off in a cell you don't even know what happened, he could've jus been trying to help the scream was recent, man, he couldn't have finished it now its not fair, at least give him the benefit of the doubt Fuck benfit of the doubt... put the mili in his mouth Pants unzipped, meanin' he was gettin' busy from the south Don't slit his neck, that will jus make this horny fag die quick Hit him where it really hurts... aka slice off his dick Be logical....your mind gotta expand or somethin Dude aint do it he was...wait his pants was unzipped? Um... DUH!! what the FUCK, Deph, you motherfuckin' BLIND? It's right in front of you, John, cut him up, now don't be kind Yo man... I don't even kno what the FUCK to say I do... CUT HIS FUCKIN DICK OFF!!! So what, if you turn gay? This guy fucked your daughter, John, it's no time to be nice Forced his dick inside, then stabbed her, it's your turn to take a slice And make sure you don't miss, on second thoughts, I think you should Scare his ass off first, then call him pussy, then go kill him good Man, don't be too violent, yo, jus try to keep your cool Hand him over to the cops, they'll kno how to handle the fool Go in the house, call 911, that's how you should do Fuck... do it, man, if I were you, john, I would too
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04-22-05, 08:40 PM
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Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: AE96 3701
good shit right here...nice to see indeph name even mentioned in OMz since he leftdis site...nice trak tho...stick to rappin tha right way mike...or spul...or spl...w/e, jus dont eva write like u did in tha otha OM i seen of urs...8/10 stright up yall...return tha fava whe i post up iight?...1
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04-22-05, 09:14 PM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: 2E75 EE69
this was some tight ass shit....i enjoyed reading it....make this audio it'd be tight....it was almost exactly like the real song.....i'd love to hear this audio....i give this an 8/10
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04-22-05, 09:23 PM
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Detrimental Thoughts
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IP: 2E75 EE69
hey man leave some feed on this aight? peace
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2104030
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04-23-05, 06:20 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 5285 DC82
good drop.. I personnaly don tlike text remakes..but this is a good read.
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04-23-05, 09:53 PM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
this was dope feelin it good job to both....1
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04-23-05, 10:04 PM
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Metropolis
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IP: B52C 6258
nice drop here, i was feelin how yall had 3 diff stories, that was original. good flows from yall too,whocares if its a remake or whatever if its a good drop its a good drop.keep doin ya thing n makin OM's thats above the status quo, ...1...
return the favor please, links are in the sig! holla at me |
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04-23-05, 10:31 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: D4CB 508F
hmmmmm...actually this was pretty good...it had a nice story line but the imagery was weak...y'all didn't describe the stories well...if it wasn't for the beginning narraction I wouldn't know what was going on....y'all had some decent vocab here an there indeph had the strong vocab...it flowed nicely tho<---seemed to be y'all focus, instead of story develop...I woulda tolerated flow being a lil off if y'all told a stronger story but I liked th eidea jus it lacked the proper storyline develop...stay up.......1
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04-23-05, 11:19 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 066B 8BBA
Damn, yall did such an unbelievable job of recreating em and dre's styles while keeping your own, thats some hot shit. I really think that if em and dre decided to do another guilty conciense that's what they'd write...
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04-24-05, 02:44 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 5DA6 AC99
^haha thanks, man.. uppin' this...
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04-24-05, 02:57 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
lmao @ you guys putting me in there....you know too much about me....
but yo, i thought this was great... i really loved how ya'll wrote it, it works prefectly and fits the whole "guilty conscience remake" well... laughed a couple times while reading it, good work...
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04-24-05, 03:05 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 0CC4 EFEF
this was a decent drop, i like the 2nd verse the most, but
it fell off on the closer, i like the concept you guys went with shit was pretty solid,.......props spul 4 gettin deph in on an om.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-24-05, 03:46 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 5DA6 AC99
aiight... props on feed. up..............
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04-24-05, 04:45 PM
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IP: B682 856F
Damn,i like the middle one best but they were all dope,Id kill the kid =0.
id give it a 8.876/10
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04-24-05, 04:49 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: 5DA6 AC99
hot shit righyt here..........
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