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Old 05-01-06, 02:46 PM   #1
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Call The Cops.. J.Summers-Shearkaughn..HOT

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Hit this up...
Kaughn on first hook
jsumms on first verse
jsumms on chorus
kahn on hook
kahn on 2nd verse
jsumms on chorus
kahn on hook
j. summers and shearkaughn on third verse
kaughn on final hook



damn... hahaha.. thats quite the switchup...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227368
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227452
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Old 05-01-06, 08:37 PM   #2
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What's hot:

1st cat's flow on the hook reminded me of Pac
1st cat on the verse has a good flow
Beat is entertaining
Like the delivery of the 2nd cat's verse

What's not:
2nd run of the hook was off beat



Overall:decent hook...good flow/delivery...good beat...I wasn't buying the "yall gonna call the cops" as the hook...However, you do keep it simple, which is key to writing hooks...I just didn't like the lyrics in it. Good track though
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Old 05-01-06, 10:43 PM   #3
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Old 05-02-06, 09:24 AM   #4
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word thanks for the feedback..i'll get with J on that hook..i just noticed that shit...but good looks
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Old 05-03-06, 10:18 AM   #5
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yeah i shit the bed on that.... but still good ish.. peep game...
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Old 05-16-06, 02:47 PM   #6
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up................................................ .
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Old 06-16-06, 06:25 PM   #7
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holy shit. real tight song. I really liked it. You guys have the same flow and thats pretty cool so I give it 9/10.

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Old 06-16-06, 06:29 PM   #8
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pretty nice...if you like the beat, check out ima boss, by tonyselfffffffffffff and i haha soooo many people using the same beats now-a-days
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Old 07-18-06, 01:51 AM   #10
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i like the person with the deep voice best on the hook shit
but jays verse was really hott i was prob feeling his best
ionno track was pretty hott overall
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