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Old 07-08-06, 12:44 PM   #1
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Kontroverzy - You Got Me Saying (Prod. WaterLeak)

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Kontroverzy - You Got Me Saying

word, this is probably the truest shit i've ever wrote. This is a must listen famz. please drop real feedback. And i'll return the favour

Lyrics/Vocals : Kontroverzy
Production: WaterLeak productions
Mastered by: Kontroverzy

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Lyrics:
Whats Up gurl...where u from...
U hotta den the sun, body got me goin num..
U lookin hella fine in them Jeans..
I think i found the gurl I've Been see'in in my dreams..
How bout u come chill wit a fly guy..
baby..im cravin for u, tell them guys bye bye..
screamin out my name..everytime i drive by..
U know i gotta stop n come say Hi, Hi
Gurl, I aint rich, but'll give u wat i got..
anywhere u wanna shop, it's nothin to a boss..
From the first time i met u, I knew i had to get u..
let me hold u, corress u, baby i'm gental..
So gurl. wats it gonna be
Is it just me and u, or u want otha things
Baby u got my heart racin..
the end of the night i can have u sayin..


chorus

U got me screaming
I got u screaming
in bed we screaming
all night we screaming.

naww gurl we don't gotta rush
we can kiss, we can touch,
lay down, such and such..
see i'm tryna find that summer wife..
is u the gurl i've been lookin for, all my life?
and if u iz, where the hell have u been..
cuz lately ive been datin crazy woman..
but now that u here, betta neva leave..
cuz the warmest in me, hotter then a sweater sleave..
N we can go for an ice cream..
do otha nice things..
Wen we together, everythang is the right thing
so wat u wanna do..
we can go for a cruise..Or go to my room..
chill with the crew, or tell me about u
we can go anywhere anything u wanna go to..
gurl u got my heart racin..
the end of the night i can have u sayin..


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Old 07-08-06, 01:27 PM   #2
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Beat is real nice...this is definitely a video track nah mean I can see this blowin up on the stations..lyrics are mainstream friendly and also on point got a good vibes..delivery is hot too I like how you whispered too this wud make a sexy video jus get those hiphop honeys..flow is good too str8 shit..but yeah this mainstream friendly, paper fo this track definitely..I see a single jus better quality like studio shit and it's a hit...dope ish
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Old 07-08-06, 01:30 PM   #3
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yeah thats whats good. appreciate it no doubt. Might throw this on the mixtape. And it's a wrap. You know what i mean. I appreciate the feedback
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Old 07-08-06, 06:20 PM   #4
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listenin.....

mainstream-ish, werd. i like ya delivery, actually it's more like ya voice that i like. flow got a lil choppy at one or 2 points in the 1st verse, but stayed on point besides that. production is good, hook is niiiice, lyrically it's nothing special but this is real catchy, the entire track. i agree w/ konvict, if u ever get the chance make the shit a video, i think you could pull this off nicely. im guessin that's a sample on the hook right? well either way, i like it. nice track, get at me if u ever wanna collab. pz
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Old 07-08-06, 06:29 PM   #5
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im down. b and rezpekt famz.
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Old 07-09-06, 10:27 AM   #6
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uppin this styll....
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Old 07-09-06, 01:17 PM   #7
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tuning up...pretty nice beat def something for the charts lyrics are kinda easy flow is on point liking the whisper part def should be on the radio this was all in a ll a pretty decent track keep doing you boss
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Old 07-09-06, 01:59 PM   #8
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thanx famz. apprecaite the feedback.
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Old 07-10-06, 05:15 AM   #9
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700 + my lawd. check it out...
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Old 07-15-06, 07:09 PM   #10
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UPN like the delivery service
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Old 07-16-06, 04:14 PM   #11
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o damn...i mistakingly deleted what i said

re-types


i'ma rescue the delay


i'm liking this beat..YES!..smooth n soft it is indeed...u need to up ur vocal volume cos it was tooooooooo low(i know it shud be but this was a lil too much or volume reduction)..ur flow is nice and steady..i like it...hook is sexy..yup...ur flow on verse 2 was nice but mayne u shudnt let us hear u catching ur breathe..do u smoke?...umm ur flow on verse 2 was iight but u like hopped off tempo @ some spots but nothing hilarious...sexy hook again...i am liking this guitar on the beat and yeah ur lyrics were cool too..fitted the whole atmosphere u know...errr nothingelse to say cos its only the beat now....aaaaand cut!


okay...nice track!decent!




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Old 07-17-06, 12:25 AM   #12
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thanx ma i appreciate ill get up that soon times
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Old 07-20-06, 11:33 AM   #13
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likin the beat so far....it got some emotion behind it...

flow is coo...laid back delievery for this type track, soundin good... i like the sample makes the hook nice.... yea this track is coo.... i like the beat.... and that sample is nice.... overall tho nice joint here ...
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Wasn't feelin nothing but the beat, wouldn't make a radio cut...dontl ike my response we can battle..

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Old 07-20-06, 05:17 PM   #15
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OOh shit my negga Kon gettin on that sensative track..

who was this dedicated to huh..lol let it be known..lol

flow is nice..pressence is laid back matched the beat...lyrics is nice
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