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Kontroverzy's Myspace

damn everyone uses this beat lol
flow didnt seem that smooth to me idk
lyrics definately talked about video games lol
hook best part of the song do far cause it sounds good when you stretch ya words to fit the flow
like the lyrics best on this 3rd verse
idk overall i liked the hook but thats all i liked to be honest wasnt really feeling your flow in this at all delivery was ok
idk

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kon you leave weak feed need to upp that

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i leave weak feed? i think you mean to say, I left weak feed.

My feedback is the nicest "depth wise"

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Kontroverzy's Myspace

well those 2 feeds you dropped were kinda weak

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LOL @ the beat.

Man i heard this beat so many times, but it' never gets played to me, lol i just lovei t. So big ups on it. Turn it up a little. I had to turn my speakers up a good bit to hear it, which is annoying, so turn vocals/beat up a little.

Lyrics are straight, nothing that makes it seem especially CRAZY, but it works and flow could have been smoother. But it's pretty straight.
I'm loving the chorus, probably the nicest part about it because it's catchy and rememberable while still being a nice chorus.

Second verse was pretty funny, the bitch sing along part made me laugh a second lol pretty much it's a straight verse.

I've heard some other tracks from you. You probably could have done better. But for what it is' it's a straight track.

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