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Old 08-13-06, 02:45 PM   #1
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Tony Green Diss...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232385
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Just had to get this lil kid a reality check............

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4311556

aiite.......

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Old 08-13-06, 02:51 PM   #2
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lol nigga I'm bout to merk your lil ass gimme 30 mins..
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Old 08-13-06, 03:38 PM   #3
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lol.......uh okay...
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Old 08-14-06, 02:57 PM   #4
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lol...umm


i wasnt feling the beat dawg it was too slent?...soft?...for a diss,yeah u had some disses but nothing new feel me?..ur flow was idk..frenetic?...like u were counting the syllabs madly i mean it was so obvious,you had to dr4ag some words too so u dont run outta tempo and stuff...umm whatelse?...u got a nice quality delivery was iight...u shud have put a lil more emotion(...like anger)...but idk why u just had me laffing after all this...boh!



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Old 08-14-06, 04:08 PM   #5
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i like the beat...its pretty cool...

intro is aight...could of been a little more hyped but other then that it was nice....
your flow and structure seems like it could of had some my syllables or words in it or something to fill up the bars....nahmean?
your delivery is alright...pretty cool i think....you had some nice disses in there

6/10 overall......just work on those things and you'll be on ya way man
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Old 08-14-06, 04:30 PM   #6
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i like ya emotion... kinda dumb in parts though... flows decent u should dub over ya shit though, make it doper... good beat, just kinda seem off of it at a few points decent... lyrics pretty weak, but word decent drop
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