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08-27-06, 03:34 PM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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27. Out Writechas (0-0) vs 28. SMG (0-0)
IP: 9179 A89B
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08-27-06, 03:47 PM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4248 7759
checkin............
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08-28-06, 12:08 PM | #3 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 993F 902D
Check...
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08-31-06, 11:45 PM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4FE6 D311
i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets videotaped it... n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch blah
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09-01-06, 02:01 AM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 4FE6 D311
bitch ass...i saw you online and u didn't even post
fuckin slut
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09-01-06, 02:04 AM | #6 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 993F 902D
Oh, nah, I'm still on...I'm tryna hurry up and come up with somethin' right now...
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09-01-06, 02:12 AM | #7 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 993F 902D
This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed... ...sorry man, but they tellin' me that we gotta shut the comps down now...take it or leave it... |
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09-01-06, 09:15 AM | #8 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: FC94 E1E4
i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down wak with self glorification u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax wak you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics YOur wording sucks , this bar was weak man. say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets videotaped it... n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley dawg ...cant you come up with anything decent? claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy WTF? this is making me mad ...your wak man keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch OMG ...this was wak I have nothing to say Vs This is absurd... ...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's decent nameplay...not good but decent You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters good nameplay but bad poorly written punch And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video LOL ....Nice A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed... [/B]Decent punch brah. SMG took this pathetically easy. [B] V/SMG |
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09-01-06, 11:12 AM | #9 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 497D AE82
^ i read ur verse to see whut credibility u have of callin my shit wack..and u don't have none, i agree with kemp when he says u don't deserve to be 4-0...
so whutever... 0-1
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09-01-06, 12:00 PM | #10 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: FC94 E1E4
well...Im thinking maybe you rushed your verse or some shit, or maybe your where to lazy to write anything decent ...thats all you...I understand no one waists most they good shit in the cypher so I also aint seen nothing hot from you there either. I'll just wait till next week or the week after to see if this was just a bad week for you. No hate or nothing dawg and mybad if it came off that way. G'luck.
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09-01-06, 01:59 PM | #11 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 041A E2A8
OW :
Nothing really to quote... Your verse was really badly worded, the optics punch was borderline at best and that was it... SMG: And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video That shit was funny, easily won the battle. You had some decent punches but 'wording' is a big key in this leauge and urs was sub par... decen shit though. Vote - SMG
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09-02-06, 01:00 AM | #12 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 44C8 8D07
Out-i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around
the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down SMG-And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video Umm yeah this battle wasnt that tight but by more creativity SMG got it Vote-SMG |
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09-02-06, 01:25 AM | #13 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 8A15 26AB
This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's o.k You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters no And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video nice lol A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed... meh i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down o.k u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax no you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics coulda been better say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets videotaped it... n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley no claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy meh keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch nice v/smg for more consistency |
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09-02-06, 10:50 AM | #14 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 50F3 EF61
This is absurd...
...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's ....weak... You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters ...Decent.... And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video .....Aii... A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed... ....Dceent... Vs. Nothing Man Overal this battle was weak bu ill give it to SMG for his attempts ..... I g2g to work Ill vote some more later
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09-02-06, 10:58 PM | #15 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 7E01 785E
Out
i drop dope, nearly 95% of the time..ask around the other 5% is just not givin a shit, like when these battles go down >>Not a good opener. u will never get a rep son, unless ya curlin ur eyelash n ya verses are as enjoyable to read like a book without a climax >>Poor attempt at creativity. you ain't my boy or his boy, never had friend..gave names to objects so if we ever remain in 'contact'...it's my fists plowin thru ya optics >>You had a concept but bad delivery. say Out stop it like i had ur girl sprawled out on my bed sheets videotaped it... n ima send u the Snipet's..leavin that pussy blacker than Wesley >>No. claim ur on deck, next to make hits..but everyone knows ya wack boy cuz u'll never make a single, so get comfy becoming rap's new bat boy >>This isn't really a punch. keystyled this quick because honestly i don't give a fuckin shit n if i had shit to give....SMG would be encrypted all over the bitch >>Not hitting. SMG This is absurd... ...I done seen plenty times when a nigga's words got ya It's more OW Ls in this site than a fuckin' birdwatcher's >>Nothing great... bad wording. You gettin' served proper; watch how every jab get ya This battle, I'm strikin' Out repeatedly like bad hitters >>Good concept but weak execution. And you don't really stand a chance- you TOO shitty, bro Last time you put up a fight, it was a YouTube video >>This was cool. A shame for this slob...I really don't see this lame as prob Consider this battle a dead loss, like a grave that's been robbed... >>Not bad, but similies get tiring. Vote: SMG Way bette concepts and just hit a lot harder in general. |
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