word me and my Nygga rippin' up track. YEA!!!


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First verse: Enygma
Second verse: SPuL
Hook: SPuL/Enygma
Third verse: Enygma
Fourth verse: SPuL
Beat: "Renegade" by Jay-Z ft. Eminem


LINKS:
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234691
2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234643

Why leave feed? Cuz we some motherfuckin' loose cannons!!!

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ok its like enygma is jay and spul is eminem but this time em doesn t kill jay hmmm interesting combo but i liked this shit no doubt specially the back and forth

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^word thanks yo..... uppp

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Allways liked this beat, gonna be hard to impress me using this beat, seen as orignal track is solid like wwwwwhaaaaaaaat!!!!!

Enygma has some decent rhymes, quality doesnt sound the best, dubs are good. Flows on point, emotion remains a bit monotone, when you spit "I need some anger management" it sounds rushed/out of breath, just is slightly off flow, but still solid, feeling the rhymes, were you stop started recorded when you spit " whos smarting off spitting off the walls" You can tell you have re-started recording there, (if im wrong my bad, but you have definitly done somthing there cause you can definitly hear the diffrence in vocals.

Spul comes in cool, bit more mellow and smooth, solid rhymes aswell, flows decent,dubs are perfect, overall decent verse.

Hooks cool, would of worked better if both parts were recorded at the same setup, cause the diffrence in production some what takes away the effect of what the hook could of been...........

yeh, kinda sick of track so thats the feed from me

^lmao thanks for that atleast foo

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Aight listenin...

Enygma...too be honest wasnt feeling this as much how I thought I would...flow is decent and str8..I jus aint feeling the delivery and presence here..breath is a lil off but its still decent just think you could still do better..

Spul..flipped it this is one of ya better verses fam..quality was near perfect...flow was hot feelin the jumpy style...real energetic ..delivery. was hot..

Hook..yeah this was hot liked how yall delivered it..

Enygma..you did much better in this 2nd one...im feeling it...flow is workin and delivery been stepped up...

Spul..your second one ssame ass verse still nice flow..lyrics are nice fammo...can hear u much better..

Hook im feeling alot...nice jawn

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....suck a dick faggot.....

Word......we shit on mics

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1st Verse - flow is on point......lyrics are dope......all da basics are covered here in this verse......yea i'm feelin this verse....
2nd Verse - flow is strate........feelin wut ya sayin in this verse........yep basics covered too in this
Hook - shit is nice, get's point across....."damn, im juss a loose cannon" like how ya deliverd that sounded like a cannon shot......
3rd Verse - juss like above everythings on point
4th Verse - ya ridin the beat real well betta than ya above verse....feelin this verse more than ya first one....

Overall - yo this shit is hot.......but imma say Enygma came harder before 1st hook, then Spul took it after tha hook.......hot track......

rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234819

pz

~1~

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thanks for feed. uppppppp

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