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It's OK. not my style......but ur voice itself is what i like.....you also have good quality.
i have a song hook only.....so i need sum heads on the verses.....hit me up on aim. nickyjetx2

aight i apreciate tha feed..ill get at u

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....suck a dick faggot.....

man i hate you

i was writing a song like this and i was jus about to record it.


the beat is the same as that LL Cool J and J.Lo song. so that sucks.


i like your voice with the beat. it blends well. as for your verses they were cool. i wish u woulda done something a little more with the hook.




hit me up on AIM
my sn is Meehahaha

lmao @ me already writing a verse to this beat...on the same damn subject...lol..

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ha damn had to do this early...yo go head drop ya 1 this aint goin on the mixtape

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....suck a dick faggot.....

sounds like intermental

beat is slick

flow is on

lyrics are typical for this style of track = not bad


keep droppin


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Like the beat man...the sample...is dope.

1st verse hot son...like the lyrics an concepts shits dope...coulda turned ur vocs up a lil bit but still on point...flows on point as always...nice presence too..

2nd not as good as the first but bangin feel me...lyrics an concepts nice...flows coo...presence comfy....

3rd Nice way to wrap this up kid....wit this first it blends everything in...i like that shit...good way to end the joint came hard wit the lyrics an flow...presence was there as well...over-all nice track dog...feelin this shit. real talk ya dig...my ratin 9/10....keep doin what u do homie...1

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This song is hot.....ur quality is hot as hell now.....u def. improved that.......your voice is tight man.....real sick on this shit......lyrics were good......delivery was hot....ur def. comin up too be a sick artist..me and you gotta do some shit .......we'll kill it..u already know.......this is the hottest shit i've heard on here.......

keep um comin man

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TheMyspace

i love the funk on this track the throw back vocal samples...

Verse1: you gotta be an alias... voice sounds wild familiar... but you doin it fam.. unique flow and delivery.. rode this properly

Verse2: Refer to verse 1

Verse3: Mr.Black... lol... i had a teacher named Mr.Black too... science i think... lol....

like how you broke down Music toward the end Ultimately " Struggle"....

whered you get this beat kid??? this shit is smooth...

keep dropin fam... and whats your Alias???

8.8/10

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

beat is cool of course sample is nice
flow was pretty cmooth lyrically i liked you your lisp sounds sexy on this you have definately been working on this so props man delivery and emotion fits the track well
3rd verse i really liked for some reason everyones got in trouble for writing shit when youre bored in class lol
talking can be upped the whole outro could be upped a little bit
a little bit a noise at the end there that coul be removed
solid track youve elevated alot hit me up for a collab
rtf - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545

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