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Old 09-17-06, 01:11 PM   #1
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21. Te Ora (0-0) vs 22. K.ontroverz.Y (0-0)

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Old 09-18-06, 01:40 AM   #2
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Old 09-18-06, 07:22 AM   #3
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cool....checcin in...
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Old 09-21-06, 07:23 PM   #4
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i thought this league was way fly.. until i saw this gay guy
i suspected you were ass.. AND THEN I SAW THE CAPITAL K.Y!!!
brokeback muthafucker.. watch me blind this brute
who is fuckin banana's.. or AT LEAST some kind of fruit
needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible
hip hop is on the decline.. with RV being the exception right?
all the REAL def reside here - how else are you the best on the mic!?
you seem to think cats are gunnin for your spot.. chompin' to unload
i'll make the target on your chest.. when i stomp you to the road
you want beef? I’m ALREADY sick of facing this failure
the AfterMath of this battle is you getting dropped like Jayceon Taylor.

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Old 09-21-06, 10:22 PM   #5
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Te Ora Couldn't be the Bomb Off the top, if he wore a taliban Rag..
When it comes to "cold beastiality,
.....................................I got this win "Seal"ed like a glad bag..
Put YOU to shame, blast TWO to brain, let blood Ooze from brain..
& They only throw "T.O"'s , out there when they're losing games..
Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..
His vision is success? wheres his eyes? somebody must of poked them out..
Your a clown,
This outcomes like a typical card game, The way i take this joker out..
Nigga git back to the basics, im nothing to play with..
Shit, he must have a Chip fetish, Way he gets "lay"ed quick..
Allow me to escort T Ora, To Thee Doora, Let heat Scorch Ya..
Quick to hit the finishline like 3 porchas,
......................Leave 'em more gassed up then a ford Explora?
rippin Kon? Are You stupid, Might aswell put gun to head and pull trigga dawg
So when you catch a win',
.....................It's cause your about to be Shitted on..
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Old 09-22-06, 12:09 PM   #6
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Old 09-22-06, 12:27 PM   #7
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thought this league was way fly.. until i saw this gay guy
i suspected you were ass.. AND THEN I SAW THE CAPITAL K.Y!!!

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Put YOU to shame, blast TWO to brain, let blood Ooze from brain..
& They only throw "T.O"'s , out there when they're losing games.

V/te ora....this was decent....but i give it to te his verse was more consistent it had less played lines in it....kon you had that one line that was pretty good but you fell off from there work on ya punchs and structure...good battle ya'll
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Old 09-22-06, 12:35 PM   #8
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i thought this league was way fly.. until i saw this gay guy
i suspected you were ass.. AND THEN I SAW THE CAPITAL K.Y!!!
needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible

vs.

Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..

Kon, u came pretty inconsistent in this match. I wanted to quote something so I quoted the TO fly play line. That concept was hot man, but u executed it poorly cuz u didn't diss him the way ya used it, you just said you were gonna drop a lotta lines, that doesn't insult him, but the concept was cool. The other TO line woulda been okay but the concept is played. Joker line wasn't too bad either, just played. Ur verse looked a bit rushed, try takin' ur time.

Te Ora, dunno if ur an alias or just from another site and I ain't heard of u before, but I liked what I saw, u came pretty nice. KY jelly shit was a dope nameplay. Football line was fresh n' the kons line was obvious n' he's prolly seen it before but not bad. Overall a pretty good first verse from u n' i'm lookin' forward to seein' more.

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Old 09-22-06, 07:01 PM   #9
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needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible
hip hop is on the decline.. with RV being the exception right?
all the REAL def reside here - how else are you the best on the mic!?

vs

Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..

TO came pretty consistent on this one. only line i didnt really like was the fruit concept cuz i've seen and used it before lol the offensive down line coulda been pulled off better but besides that i dont really see anything wrong w/ his verse.

kon had a lot of played concepts. truthfully, i've seen every one of his concepts before. even the line i quoted was played but because it was a personal, it made it hit a bit harder. but you used 2 TO nameplays in the same verse, thats a no no lol

anyway....
v/ te ora
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Old 09-22-06, 08:08 PM   #10
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i thought this league was way fly.. until i saw this gay guy
i suspected you were ass.. AND THEN I SAW THE CAPITAL K.Y!!!
needless to say your flow is wrong.. you should break n buck
i weighed the pro's and Kons.. to find the Kons lightweight as fuck
you ain't original.. and i might say i checked your audio
you treat each track like an offensive down..
and change the play like an audible

vs.

Put the whip on 'em like a driveway, this is due the day before friday?..
Damn Nigga, This is gonna be a Long Drop, like a T.O Fly play..


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Old 09-23-06, 02:24 AM   #11
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Old 09-24-06, 07:01 AM   #12
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Te Ora wins 4-0.

Te Ora wins (1-0)
K.ontroverz.Y loses (0-1)
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