round 2
10-14 my ng

why does this ALL seem so familiar??

lolz. cool sonz. lets try to post early though, yo.

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I'll MERK SON!!! then grabbing the shovel to get some work done
Aint hard to see I'm Unstable like the crib you post ya verse from
Came out swinging right bitch? think u winning? I feel U
Claim to Popeyes...but nowadays eating that spinach'll KILL U
ya girls trash, passed her a rag to clean the dirt off her features
1st time i seen a bathing ape without me purchasing sneakers
A chick kick it to this fag he wont be able to ride her
He's into Cox Communications like the cable provider
Didnt I beat you already? you aint meant to contend
You started my title run so I'ma end yours....AGAIN
De Ja Vu, my punches'll be smacking em sillier......
he'll hit hit the floor and say

Hate to be forced to quote, against a kid they thought was dope
but C-UT battling me and leave with one across his throat
chea!



edit:14 lines un...lets get this up!

ok, ok..

gimme a sec. i just walked in tonight.

will drop soon.

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look.. i'm a ask for an extension.

my girls in town, yo.. and i just been madd busy with her. haven't seen her in a minute.

so yea.. gimme till tomorrow. i will have a verse ya'll. once again, sorry tav.

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damn thats cutting voting time mad short.......

ur lazy fool, so be ready for when the round hit ya
slut, u ain't my home boy.. ur just a straiight up house nigga
.
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fuck computers 'n shit, cuz tav be thinkin real dence
so if u have a gateway.. i'll shove ya through the links in the fence
i'll put a knife in this chump 'n leave the faggot in fear
cuz me stabbin ya will be the most insertion u've had in years
this guys shit, he aint the truth, ur just a lie, bitch
cuz ur pentel's lies even when ur not usin that brand to write wit
'n i'll upper cut this fag, 'n leave 'em in the air from this whorin
cuz if sky's the limit.. thats as far u'll fly when i send ya soarin
bitch, i'm a drown ya ass so bad, u'll need first aid duties
u'll be so far under the sea.. u'll be in the new lil mermaid movie
plus ya chicks fowl, i swear i would be wrong to hound her
cuz ur chick couldn't be Beautiful..
..even if Pharell and Snoop made a song about her

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I'll MERK SON!!! then grabbing the shovel to get some work done
Aint hard to see I'm Unstable like the crib you post ya verse from
not bad
Came out swinging right bitch? think u winning? I feel U
Claim to Popeyes...but nowadays eating that spinach'll KILL U
ehh, alright
ya girls trash, passed her a rag to clean the dirt off her features
1st time i seen a bathing ape without me purchasing sneakers
lmao. i just read an untold battle on rapbattles, he straight up jacked this concept from you.
A chick kick it to this fag he wont be able to ride her
He's into Cox Communications like the cable provider
lol, k
Didnt I beat you already? you aint meant to contend
You started my title run so I'ma end yours....AGAIN
nah
De Ja Vu, my punches'll be smacking em sillier......
he'll hit hit the floor and say
Quote:

Originally Posted by Untold
why does this ALL seem so familiar??

haha
Hate to be forced to quote, against a kid they thought was dope
but C-UT battling me and leave with one across his throat
chea!
cool



ur lazy fool, so be ready for when the round hit ya
slut, u ain't my home boy.. ur just a straiight up house nigga
nah
fuck computers 'n shit, cuz tav be thinkin real dence
so if u have a gateway.. i'll shove ya through the links in the fence
nice visual
i'll put a knife in this chump 'n leave the faggot in fear
cuz me stabbin ya will be the most insertion u've had in years
ehh
this guys shit, he aint the truth, ur just a lie, bitch
cuz ur pentel's lies even when ur not usin that brand to write wit
cool
'n i'll upper cut this fag, 'n leave 'em in the air from this whorin
cuz if sky's the limit.. thats as far u'll fly when i send ya soarin
nah
bitch, i'm a drown ya ass so bad, u'll need first aid duties
u'll be so far under the sea.. u'll be in the new lil mermaid movie
lol, kinda cheesy bro
plus ya chicks fowl, i swear i would be wrong to hound her
cuz ur chick couldn't be Beautiful..
..even if Pharell and Snoop made a song about her
nahhh, heard this when this came out man


vote-tavarez. i personally like Untolds style more, but the concepts were kind of simple. I liked the pentel line though, i could see this going either way honestly. but i liked TAV'S ( ) bathing ape line, and i liked the CUT throat line too. Untold didnt do bad. mermaid and snoop lines were bad tho. the links in the fence line was cool tho man. Tav's popeyes line wasnt bad, didnt like the spinach part of it though. kinda weird.

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DOHpe.

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my links are in the multi battle
good shit Un just wish you posted with more time for votes

ya girls trash, passed her a rag to clean the dirt off her features
1st time i seen a bathing ape without me purchasing sneakers
A chick kick it to this fag he wont be able to ride her
He's into Cox Communications like the cable provider
Didnt I beat you already? you aint meant to contend
You started my title run so I'ma end yours....AGAIN

vs.

fuck computers 'n shit, cuz tav be thinkin real dence
so if u have a gateway.. i'll shove ya through the links in the fence
this guys shit, he aint the truth, ur just a lie, bitch
cuz ur pentel's lies even when ur not usin that brand to write wit

Tav came okay, pretty consistent verse. Started out the first few bars with some played ideas, but it really picked up after that. Untold had the pentel line which was cool, but that was about it. Gateway I quoted, but coulda been doper with better usage. The rest was either played or just not that hard hitting.

Vote - N. Tavarez

Cya next week