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10-03-06, 05:51 PM
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CHEVY SLUT.. K.O.T.N...J.Summers Big Breezy.Yvonne on da track.. IZ HOTTT
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The truth in this shit JSummz Big Breeze Yvonne Breeze on Hook Do it to it... Get Crunk Music... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235416 yvonne left feed i'll post up more in a sec
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10-03-06, 08:31 PM
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yvonnn gots too much bass in her voice eq that shit...................
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10-03-06, 10:33 PM
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thaz all u gotta say c'mon man....
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10-03-06, 10:46 PM
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kk listnin..........beatz ...ehh tis ight.....not my choice but.......dont like tha hook.....
too plain er summin......your verse.......starts strong.....lyrics iz nice......flowz on point..as is delievry...... second guy ......nice southern grime hurr.........kinda soundin like paul wall......lol nice though........yavvone......yuck!!!!!!! once again she needs to read sum mixing tuts....cause this is too loud with base and just all over tha place....i can even hear tha mic poping.....not good......but chea.....couldnt make out her voice till tha very end....so overall decent trackk........nice verse summerz we need to collab for sho...... and breezes verse was way better than tha hook but werd str8 track 7/10
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10-04-06, 01:07 AM
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dont like the soudn of the screwed parts
not loud enogh doesnt really stand out summ youre verse had nice flow i think you clould ass some bass i think the adlibs could be thicker idk you kinda fade off in the end of your verse kinda hard to hear you breezy like ya lyrical content and your flow delivery idk i didnt like you on this you sould show some mroe emotion yvvonne kinda hard to hear you can hear some pops idk cant really comment cause your vocals were mad low overall probably the worst song ive heard from j summers idk jsut wasnt feeling it and the mixing needs worked on
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10-04-06, 10:35 AM
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ouch yo.................i was really feelin this shit... maybe i'll do some more work on it then edit it up........
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10-04-06, 01:15 PM
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Wow.... Yvonne sounds like Willa wit a Adams Apple
 i really like this joint man... i dont know what all the Heavy ass Critiquing is bout.... this joint is a banger... i want to add this to rotation... but b4 i do... all i can suggest is raising the volume on the Screwed parts so that they hit harder... nahmean.... cuz they a lil low... it sounds dope... but if it was a lil louder itd POP a lil better and really hit wit that screwed part... nahmean... itd stand out more... but aside from that... i was digging this home boi. fo real whens that Tito/ Summz Schnops jump off hitting the streets??? lol Holla at me family -Don Tito Bronsky
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10-04-06, 05:45 PM
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...Closer Look...
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..............wow! i thank y'all for peeping this... just keep 'em coming and drop ur linx!
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10-04-06, 06:09 PM
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Lmaooooo @ yvonne recycling that verse
but anyway, i sorta agree w/ tito. this track actually kinda hot. the screwed part does need to be boosted, and yvonne's verse is a bit low but besides that i dont see too much wrong w/ it
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10-04-06, 06:19 PM
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chorus blows... verse one has a nice start, starts losin it at the end... work on vocab... verse two is very monotone, too plain, lyrics are simple, honestly, this sucks... work on your vocab... verse 3 sounds like a 12 year old boy, too much bass, lyrics arent understandable, flow is presentable, adlibs are too low... not a real great verse... this has too much of a franchise boy sound for my liking... yall sound like some paul wall lovers...
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10-04-06, 06:56 PM
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gracias tone... and zach you just pissed your cracker ass cant snap dance
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10-04-06, 07:23 PM
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your fukkin up... for one im white/indian, an two... just because i didnt like your song doesnt meen ur gonna have the ability to get mouthy an win an arguement... do the world a favor an commit suicide in a room full of stuffed animals...
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10-04-06, 07:37 PM
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zach go play.......................and raise your hand before you speak to me
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10-04-06, 07:52 PM
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sorry bout not finishin but yo hook is kinda dumb needs to be brought out more better mixing wuld do the job word summers verse was cool it was ight...delivery was ok overall decent verse man.....hook like i already said word.....next dude ehh not feelin his voice lyrics waws ight coulda been better yvonne like i already said lol overall decent drop
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10-04-06, 08:03 PM
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yo zach left wut he thought no need to be prickz............................and yall never returned any feed
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