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10-28-06, 02:57 AM
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Shut Up... PROMO!!!
IP: 4A58 97DC
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4600915
this is unfinished... ill edit this shortly when the other verses are done.  left feed on: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236449 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236304 leave proper feed an ill rtf 
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10-28-06, 11:12 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
at the start, it reminded me of something BRitney Spears would dance to...iono man..no offense...but, Im not feelin the beat...I was waitin for "O BABY BABAAAAY...HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO KNOW"
Flow is nice tho...like ur presence on here... U have potential 1 |
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10-28-06, 01:16 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 0433 C19A
I can hear what Q's talking about, but I don't really think it reminds me of a Britney song. Flow's nice. Sounds kinda like a bragging track. You should maybe raise your vocals a bit cause it sounds like the beat is overpowering them a bit. But then again, soundclick tends to do that to songs. Is that the hook towards the end of your verse, cause if it is, it could benefit from a little layering to differentiate it from the verse.
Nice shit though man
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10-28-06, 01:23 PM
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IP: 63BD B3C8
thx for the feed guys = ), i dunno how to layer tho... but no, that was just a 20 bar verse.
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