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09-25-06, 11:43 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Drained Emotions
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Can you please explain why you want me to change to be somebody i ain't and end up causin me pain I handed you my heart on a golden platter You threw it back in my face, broken and battered Now your actin like i wasn't lovin and carin When i even introduced you to both off my parents confessed my need to be with you until i decease gave you all off my heart and not just a piece You masked your face with a smile and told me the same But all the while I was just a pawn in your game So when I heard you cheated it felt like i got stabbed in the back But this was no knife the pain came from an act Theres no pill for my pain To fix the thoughts in my brain Permanently scaring my heart never have i felt a pain cut so deep My eyes overflowed and tears left rivers flowin down my cheeks Mind flashing past memorys of you and me look how happy we once used to be It's all to much, i collapse I'm crushed I can't stand up my two feet won't budge All I can do is lay there head in my hands The hour glass is empty you've taken the sand (Chorus x2) Drained Emotions Tears flowing like oceans Pain and scars painting my heart If love is a battlefield, I'm losing the war You showed no signs off the inevitable end We were the most incredible lovers and friends When we kissed life as I knew it seemed to stand still I thought we had something this illusion felt real I was always there for you, but I had nothing to grip, you let me slip when I fell I knew you were two faced somehow I could tell yet my softside always prevailed Meanwhile I apeared to be fine guess I covered it well on the surface Inside was another story you made me feel worthless And maybe that was your purpose You put me trough hell yet I couldn't leave When you cried i provided a shoulder but me all i had was my sleeve There is only so much I can take Even the hardest glass breaks You've taken it to far And left me just a pile of shards (Chorus x2) Drained Emotions Tears flowing like oceans Pain and scars painting my heart If love is a battlefield, I'm losing the war Third verse now I'm fuckin heated Save your fake appology I dont need it Besides you wouldn't mean it First time around you cheated And if I took you back, you'd just repeat it The tables turned now I dont give a fuck I'ma make you wish you NEVER did this to us Why would you do this I was so lovin What were you thinkin? Nevermind guess you just wasn't Guess you forgot who really loved you How could I be so naive how could I trust you Always sneakin behind my back and bein secretive Hope next time your better at keepin it (Chorus x1) Drained Emotions Tears flowing like oceans Pain and scars painting my heart If love is a battlefield, I've lost the war....
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09-25-06, 11:47 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Links
#1 Devin-Love Life http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233472 #2 Mindstate-Find a Different Girl Bitch http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234540
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09-26-06, 04:04 AM | #3 | |||||||
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pretty deep simple rhyme scheme but shit was put getha nice. had a lil bit of runnin lines but not 2 bad keep droppin homie peep my shit lyrical hustla
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10-16-06, 08:56 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Thanks... Uppin
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10-17-06, 04:12 AM | #5 | |||||||
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let me find out a bitch had your head fucked up nice shit. I liked the personal feel of it. wasn't too complex but it didnt need to be. tough shit.
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10-17-06, 04:19 AM | #6 | ||||||
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nice drop here son...keep it up and keep it coming....nice emotion and nice overalll flow...though complexity is pretty basic still it was decent!
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10-17-06, 07:48 PM | #7 | |||||||
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Thanks for the feed.. Fear wana collab?
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10-18-06, 01:17 PM | #8 | |||||||
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This was great the flow lost me on the second verse as if you stretched it a little too far... but FINALLY
Something worth reading graced my eyes...unlike those other shits I replied to..I hope there are more cats like you on this site...shit its decent as I can be... I'm durable... but what not you came and delivered and greatness has thoroughly been spread throughout this thread nice one 1ne.
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10-18-06, 10:47 PM | #9 | |||||||
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Thanks man i appreciate that soon as you drop an OM let me know so I can return the favor
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