http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235632
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235777
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Just a new track.......i edited the AFI track Prelude 1221 and made it a beat....i hope yall like it.......any feedback is 'preciated......

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alrighty I'm listenin...this intro is fucked, it's pretty cool though with the singing on it. is it you? idk but it's cool. The beat is pretty deadly like a headbanger. The flow is pretty cool, I personally would went faster to this cuz slow beats are wack. Your delivery is there, seems to be pretty good I guess. The hook is pretty deadly, kinda sounds like singing, and the effect you put on it sounds pretty cool too. overall pretty decent track. keep it up dude. rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235833

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I actually liked the mysterious bell intro...held my interest


U didn't ride the beat that well at the start, IMO...u needed more bravado and breath control....HOLD SOME of yoiur syllables longer


otherwise, it was good...I liked the sound of the track


Hook was too processed...but it was memorable


Pretty unique soundin track man



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'preciate it Q............all feedback has been returned.....

pz

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i agree with Q i was really feelin the intro.....first verse was ight lyrics should prolly should be stepped up a tad but they bad....the lil singing at the beginning added some good flavor to it....flow should be sped up just a little bit.....the hook really goes with the beat well....i like it...second verse is a little bit better flow wise lyrics are pretty much the same just step it up a little bit...a little more emotion would also help ya too....beat is tight too...really goes with the concept....overall 7/10....

rtf please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235858

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'preciate da feedback.........all feedback has been returned.....

pz

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alright i'm peeping now

The beat is straight iono

Singing is cool in the beginning...sounds like some emo stuff
lool

Nice flow your delivery seems like its gotten way better than the last time i heard ya shit...good stuff...lyrics are cool......nice swagga on the track.....this is a nice lil joint man...

That hook lol seriously seems like uhhh emo music but its all good


good track bro

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lol.............'preciate da feedback PT.....nah man i aint on some emo shit...but yea AFI is pretty emo........haha

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itro was coo first verse was a lil choppy delivery needs to be upped.....u nneed to smooth it out....i think u should re record it....if ur gonna flow that slow ur gon need adlibs...hook is aight but it sounds more of a sample so im not sure if u recorded it....sencond verse same as the first ......overall decent track man