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10-28-06, 06:44 AM
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Prah'Ject - I See (REAL SHIT RIGHT HERE YALL)
IP: 7EBA 8803
Did a whole diff flow for this just for this track alone....on some real shit....
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10-28-06, 07:26 AM
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uppp...........
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10-28-06, 07:27 AM
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...Closer Look...
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guess ima say it again...
beat is cool...i like it...shud have put some intrumental at the begining instead of the it just starting like that,its kinna shocking cos i had my speakers a lil up mayne,think of those with them headphones,lol...lyrics are alright..seems real aint no 'metaz' and stuff..flow is pretty simple no switch(shud have dont that a lil in verse 2) in it but works with the beat and atmosphere created..yeah hooks are cool i liked the dubs u put in the first 1 shud have stuffed in a lil more in the second so it wud just outro like that...mixing was just iight aint nothing wrong with that...u got a gd quality and cool delivery...your presence on this piece was just on point..lil ups and down in 'em according to the lyrics...thats gd!..this is the kinna track i'd listen to when i wanna relax and reflect a lil on my life...pretty tight!...
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10-28-06, 07:40 AM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
word thanks, I dont understand the switch up, cos I did a lil and it was mainly about tha lyrics nah mean real shit u gotta look beyond it's meaning alotta truth in there...alotta truth
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10-28-06, 07:46 AM
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IP: B3E8 B43A
Aight listenin, beat is cool feelin that shit, Verse is hot feelin tha juelz -like rhyme scheme fits that beat nice.....delivery is cool....but sounds like u strugglin too stay that slow on tha beat cuz ain't really ure element....hook again...nice sample.....verse again is nice.....some dope multi's and concepts throughout this...feelin it alot....overall.....8.2/10
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10-28-06, 07:47 AM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
word thanks for the feed
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10-28-06, 11:09 AM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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I like the beat
I like how you handled the beat...sounds good... lyrics could be more memorable, however... otherwise...enjoyable listen...flow reminds me of Camron a tad RTF please 1 |
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10-28-06, 11:29 AM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
aight thanks man, ill rtf later today jus a bit tired righ now
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10-28-06, 01:09 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 0433 C19A
Damn man, I'm feelin this whole vibe man. Some real shit man. I think you could ride the beat a little better man, but I'm definitely feeling this shit man. It seems like the beat changes in my head a bit. At some points I expect a Dipset type of flow, but then I expect just a mellow flow. Maybe it's just me....lol.
But nice shit man, for real 
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10-28-06, 01:36 PM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
Thanks man yeah this was out of my usual swag but u know have to do that extra to hit the mixtape with sumin people won't expect nah mean bruh?
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10-28-06, 01:48 PM
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honestly i hate when people sample songs in beats
verse - haha damn sounds like dipset..adlibs add a little more to the track so thats cool. flow is too much like that. but its something new from you so thats cool. just a little boring. i like how you up your emotion in the middle of the verse. some of the adlibs go a little high though. hook - your hook reminds me of ghostface. your adlibs are cool cause if they werent there it would be really plain verse 2 - again with that same flow. not really any switches so its kinda predictable. lyrics are average. nothing stands out too much. i like that part about the islam religion though. so thats cool. again you up your emotion a little with that "damn" adlib. i like the concept of this though. hook - sounds alright. just a little empty. maybe some adlibs. or something to add to it. overall it works. the only problem i would say is that last hook is very empty and plain. good job |
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10-28-06, 02:22 PM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
Yeah tha thing with that the song gon feat my man ojay on that and shit so i got it covered cos we extending the beat so it aint done thanks
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10-29-06, 06:40 AM
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IP: 7EBA 8803
Upp..............
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10-29-06, 11:03 AM
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L.E
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Listening...
Beat is solid. On the verses, you came nice...you have elevated alot man. Flow is nice, but it would be nie to hear some change ups...nothing horrible though. Lyrics were pretty good...kinda catchy. Hook was nice. We gotta do another collab sometime man. Keep it up. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236476 |
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11-01-06, 04:23 PM
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aight az im mean prah lil slow for me not really feeling the beat choice ya words would have been mor eemphasized over a lil quiker beat but you def elevated ya shit was on point no doubt throw something myway but faster than this killA
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