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Old 10-29-06, 10:50 PM   #1
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The Devil's Son a.ka. Hell's Jesus

IP: 48C5 C14C

Deep in the firery pits of hell/ trapped in this tower's top floor's cell
no release dat and no bail/ ruling everybody in this land of fail
demon soilders in front of these steel gates
infront of this long road where evil waits
never ment to awake/ except for this day
top class goblins & fiends guarding these doors
to this tower of hell consisting of 13 floors
first 5 floors, watched over by elemental godly demons
fire, water, thunder, rock, plant; powered type heathens
floors six thru ten/ theres pain objects within
and traps for those who have never sinned
11th floor complete darkness/ to represent my emptyness
in my soul
12th floor pictures of the past memories I hold
memories of hatred, backstabbing, & betrayl
13 floor I set here empty, "The King of Hell"
I'm alone and unable to leave this throne
except for this one day when hell meets earth
Halloween the only day i have to do my work
I must plant the seed that will give birth
to my son of evil deeds & anti-chruch
my son, hell's jesus/ currently a fetus
sent here to give pay back to those that had hate
to show them how they affected my fate
the demons awake and wait......

**walks over to calendar, looks at Oct. 31**

........until this date
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Old 10-29-06, 10:52 PM   #2
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thats actually not that bad i kinda like the concept but ur gonna get flamed like hell
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Old 10-29-06, 10:57 PM   #3
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thanx appreciate tha feed

but why would they flame me, cuz its like un churchly or some10 lol

na i understand though
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Old 10-30-06, 12:31 AM   #4
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i thought single sylable rhyme schemes were extinct. or at least i hoped they were.

this is gonna get locked though, as it ritefully should.
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