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11-21-06, 10:18 PM
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This Song Me And My Nigga Did...1st Person Him 2nd Me
D-Boy (HI) D-Boy(LO) Left Feed On These Two Tracks.............. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237327 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237460
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11-22-06, 12:39 PM
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11-22-06, 12:39 PM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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Listenin'....
1st dude.. vocals too high yeah qual too bad..yall new so it's kl...i can tell u starting off...confidence is aight...keep working on what u do..lyrics are jus meh nah mean but yall starting out so I ain't hattinng.. kord...yeah ya quality is ass lol..flow is str8 u cud def improve ya shit jus keep working at it.cudnt hear the lyrics cos quality aint good..keep doing what u do...ya knw good for a beginner..so no doubt
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11-22-06, 03:33 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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lol @ ur mic man...I can't laugh cuz mine sounds jus as shitty
but um...I can tell ur reading...FLOW BRO FLOW! lyrics are decent...rhyming decent....just up all elements 1 |
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11-22-06, 07:52 PM
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You Laughin Nigga Like We Aint Got The Same Mic....Yeah, Sike Nah Tho I Got A Mic I Just Need To Buy The Converter To Plug Into The Comp
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11-23-06, 12:39 PM
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beat is ight ....hook is cool i like it first verse mic is horrid lmao u need to flow better need delivery and presence.....lyrics pretty simple............u need to smooth the shit out overall decent job word rtf
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11-24-06, 02:46 AM
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Not a big fan of this beat but i'm not a bass person.
One of the better choruses i've heard tonight . WHOAAAA vocals seem a little bleh on the first person. His flo seems a little...like he's reading off paper and tryin to keep up. wow no comments on the second person i couldnt understand him. Overall i would just have to say up the quality and maybe...memorize your lines or something i don't know. I don't even write anymore WHOA WHAT THE HELL where'd the third person come from. thought it was just you two. Are you talkin about your day...wow....no comments on third verse...lmao smacked her on the ass? ummm..yea.
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