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11-30-06, 05:55 PM
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The Paragraph President
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Revolutionary Red - You ft. Paranoid
IP: 2372 BC06
www.soundclick.com/paranoid05
1st Verse: Red Hook: Para 2nd verse: Red This is a sort track semi dissin this cat from our school. He tries to rap and shit plus he bit a professionals name. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3115830 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3115828
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12-02-06, 07:08 PM
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The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: 9DB1 76F4
Listenin'...
yeah beat is hot.. Rev. Red.. u got the right delivery here..multis are good..and lyrics koo...and emotion also good..that's all the pros, cons , ya flow is a lil off..ya dig..and quality.....is not good but u cant do anything about.. oh snap this hook is actually pretty HOT...para suprised me there..hook is hot..I like that "YOU.." Red same shit as first verse..flow is a bit better tho here... this hook is pretty hot..has the right melody...u need to turn it up a lil bit..but this hook is crack...good job
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