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Old 04-11-07, 05:04 AM   #1
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west coast love

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just another late night random ass piece, i dont really got any problems with the north east or south, its just in good fun, so bring on the feedback.

i cant stop these rymes from comin out of my mouth,
this ones all about the west coast fuck the north,east and south,
the west is the place that started it all,
continuosly on the rise when all other coasts fall,
we got the gangs, the sunshine and the movie stars,
we move faster on our feet than yall do in your cars,
we got places to be and people to see,
where the only thing you need to watch out for is the L.A.P.D,
cause they well find a way to pinpoint you with false charges,
we where our white tees that fit not them tripple extra larges,
lookin like you wearin a nightgown in the day,
mac dre started the hyphy movement down in the bay,
now its gone worldwide, but yall aint doin it right,
we go dumb on our car roofs in the day and the night,
poppin thizz pillz is a way of live down here,
kids be killin in the streets for a tattoo of a tear,
up on there cheek right below the eye,
but its kinda ironic cause us thugs never cry,
thats cause we got hearts of ice and abs of steal,
the barrel of our guns so hot it well make your skin peel,
64 impalas hoppin down the street on hydrolics,
we talk in street language that we call ebonics,
you got little pea shooters but are weapons are atomic,
and we aint affraid to use them to protect are super chronic,
we makin money in the streets cause thats all we know,
pimpin out hoes and makin them sell our herbs and blow,
im not tryin to scare ya im just tryin to warn ya,
if you aint from the west coast stay the fuck up out of california,
cause if we even suspect your from out of town,
well find out where your stayin and well gun ya down,
not all of us are rollin with a gang though,
but we got california love that we love to show,
like me, i aint in a gang but ill rep my territory,
ill make a bullet to your head be the end of your life story,
the west well take on anybody who wants drama,
well kill you your dad you sister and your mama,
just to show that we dont fuck around down here in cali,
take your money and your car than ditch your mangled body in an alley,
were all shady characters that you need to watch out for,
try to car jack us and well smash your head in the car door,
get back in the whip and just drive off like its nothin,
roll up some herb in a blunt, and thats what we be puffin,
gettin stupid high wit a couple of the boys,
playin with guns like litlle kids be playin with there toys,
brought you the game, snoop dogg and 2-p-a-c,
yall gave us crap like 50, jadakiss and B.I.G.,
now you tell me who is comin out victorious,
its the place where the smog is deathly but the women are glorious,
its the place where we do it big in every single way,
its the place i was born and the place im gonna stay,
its the home of the chronic weed and the snow white yay,
its the state on the west coast called CALIFORNI-A.
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Old 04-11-07, 07:20 PM   #2
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nice flow it was smooth....u should add multis to enhance it and make it sound more complex....7/10

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