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Old 05-18-07, 02:50 PM   #1
Jay Rose
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2 new fuckin songs....FREESTYLED COMPLETELY

IP: 3011 7E9C

yo, me n my boy got drunk n freed two whole songs...hooks n all...pretty gangsta...tell me what you think....

Grind Hard - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5357340

Gangstas - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5357356

i left feed on played me by implicit, and balled up by picture perfect

ill return all feed...so hit me up...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
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i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-18-07, 03:11 PM   #2
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ayo i already talked to u bout these on AIM

honestly better than a lot of the stuff that comes out of RV nowadays..and the fact that its all freestyled is sayin somethin.

i liked the hook on that gangstas track and your verse was hot..

but on that other grind hard track i feel like the other dude outshined u.

honestly good stuff...but u can hear little slip ups here and there..but it comes with freestyling so good job



oh yea you and Ike sound similar..
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Old 05-18-07, 11:29 PM   #3
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^^So at least I know it's possible for you to like something.

ugh...neway


I listened to Grind Hard...


Beat was aiight


1st verse...flow was lackluster...lyrics were okay


Hook is a lil sloppy in the mixing...but it was delivered well

Jay...flow was good


a few good lines here and there


overall was a good track




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Old 05-21-07, 08:29 PM   #4
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word...maybe some other feed?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 05-21-07, 09:17 PM   #5
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wasnt really fellin the 1st one.... it was iight.. just not doing it.. for a freestyle is was good.. flow was good.. shit was iight.....not that good but iight.. 2nd guy.. is better then the first dude... alot better.. more emotion.. shit was nice... 2nd one.. ill listen to it later
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