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05-03-07, 09:51 PM | #1 | ||||
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me against the world (re-do)
IP: CF86 0039
yo its me against the world. a tussle of the titans
i get blocked by boulders and clouds but i continue writing. i continue fighting. cause ive learned not to get pushed around. so its me against the world in the fight for the sound. ima legend on the ground. here i have a high count of respect. a high intelect with rhymes of crushing death. what do u expect? from one of the undergrounds greatest. nothing more then to be out played and out hated. ive seen people get stabed in the back and i was hated to death. but i continue to bust rhymes till i hear there none left. and if there is none left. then ill have to make up a few more. till im out of breath, gasping while i lay on the floor. this world cant stop me, it pushes so i shove even harder. im an essence to this game like a fish needs water. no one hotter. they can say it but lyricly they a bust. cause no way in the game can someone fuck with us. i mean Hightown. the most elite in the game. we seated with the legends while it continues to rain. our hopes will stand while the world continues its evil. ima keep my game strong while i contine rounding people. ill grab a needle and inject myself with rap genes. and slowly become the best rapper uve ever seen. my flow clean. but i keep it dirty from the south. its that M I A kid, where words fly out our mouth. rapid spitters are formed into acid twisters lyricly. spiting more words to the oblivion of infinity. let the world come and try to put a burdern on my shoulders. ima soul-ja. and this battle is not OVA. i told ya. i get dust thrown in my eyes. im triped and ganged on. slanged on like a gang that did the day wrong. the world against me. since the day of my birth. i was born a blessing but im living a curse. life ive learned could be my friend or enemy. it plays both ways like the wind with the trees. now stare at me. and tell me u dont feel envy. and when ur ready tell me to spit it steady. ive been tossed around. and had shit to deal with. some shit lead to me being real pissed makin a list. to deal with at the end of the year. a resolution of tears to take out the fears. ive had friends die, and family memebers fade away. so i was left alone with the world at my face. now im still here. screaming at this planet. i had the chance... so i jumped up and grabed it. but when my time comes. ill be one of the few. leaving the earth with the soul of two. cus im Scanz and calvin. to legends of a different realm. may the world fuck off and let the time dwel..... i just didnt stop typing... this really isnt what i do.. i feel its a lil off from my style... those that seen what i can do please post on this piece and tell me what u think... its ok and a quicky. and yes i know the flow is a lil off... but its a really fast keystyle with no beat or rythme so make one to flow with it.. that lines that are long are to be said fast...
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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father. Last edited by scanz : 05-03-07 at 10:01 PM. |
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05-03-07, 10:01 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: CF86 0039
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3164567
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3164568 ok Hightown. the group i created with some friends by the block. young kids. most pretty good.. i dont take noobs. just incase u wondering what hightown was. M I A.... really stupid if u dont get its miami.... (putting it there cus i know some stupidass gonna ask later...) i think that it....
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05-05-07, 02:11 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 68E9 5207
ehhh....this was decent at best, simplistic wordplay, nothing that really caught my attention enough to read the entire piece but for the most part it could use a little work, good effort though...keep up.
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05-05-07, 06:12 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: CF86 0039
thanks for being honest... im a rapper but i take breaks to much so i lose flow then come back to good then go away again.... dunno sometimes i get bored but i come back cus i love it
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05-07-07, 10:43 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 33E3 44D7
it was iight man nothing stood out to me... but fuck wut I say keep writin n keep gettin better
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05-07-07, 09:29 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 26FC 8E94
it was good man ....i see potential in it...... it seems u were trying to be creative on some parts then at the end a little deep...also this was a keystyle as u said ...so ....im guessing u could have been alot more creative and complex if u concentrated on it instead of keystyling....keep writing and doing what u do...~1~
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06-03-07, 02:01 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: CF86 0039
uppin this piece....
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