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Old 01-11-07, 10:12 AM   #1
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Old 01-11-07, 10:17 AM   #2
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Old 01-11-07, 04:14 PM   #4
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Old 06-21-07, 07:36 PM   #6
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RTF please on my new spoken word joint...


What's hot:

1 Beat...pretty slick
2 Rhyming is pretty decent


What needs work:

1 Some adlibs throughout the 2nd run of the hook
2 vocals sound unusual...muffled a bit...u entered the beat oddly, IMO
3...Flow is decent at best here...but erratic/disjointed sounding


Overall:
Had potential...but lacked polish



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