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ok im done playin im gonna rip B.E.S.T with this shit.....

my morbid mind is capable of moving objects away from gravity.....
i'll Cut Fly E's "chest open and stab his heart with a fork".....
.....my version "open heart surgery".......
mixing ebola and tuberculosis with chemical substances together.....
creates me bringing the storm in worst than cyclonic weather.....
Sonny Bars a fucking joke your so called ILL text getting ripped to shreds....
fucking with 300?....like "maggots eating bodies in caskits"....
i'll leave u and your "verbal scripts for the insects when u dead"....
i'll eat threw yall rhyme shit treat yall like "baffalo"...
..... so" beware of the arrows and spears"....
all B.E.S.T members get dealt with and "left in hospital beds"...
like "patients suffering cancer of bone marrow living in fear".....
this just the beginning of the end for yall so back down immediately.....
i'll carve Sicks head open and infest it with Encephalitis...
the only time u truely "sick in the head" with anything....
taking over yall territory and empire is easy....
....like "German movements against European nations".....
and like a spread of black death killing millions in the middle ages....
.....my lyrical content against B.E.S.T is causing much "devestation"......
its an obvious fact that im too advance for yall minds....
like "Arachnoiditis affecting spines"....
......i'll leave konsepts "nerves and membranes damaged".....
.......whenever i spit out an acidic based deadly rhyme!......
after this a 9 line medavac should be called in....
...... to evacuate whats left of B.E.S.T.....
but yall wont ever make it to the recovery phase.....
....so i'll prepare this crews tombs to lay them to rest.....

yall just not ready.......

my links......

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243532
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243295

~1~

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B.E.S.T.....HAHA

DANM....

this shit was FIRE....

NICE PUNCHES...
NICE FLOW...
CREATIVNESS WAS GOOD...

DANM HOTNESS ALL OVA....


YA HAVE BEEN OFFICALLY SONNED BY K-M... REPP'IN 300 J.G HARD BODY...

WE RUNNING THIS RAP SHIT....

thanks fam....but thats just the beginning...if B.E.S.T wanna continue to diss....~1~

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B.E.S.T.....HAHA

I think creativity is one of your strong points, what you need to work on is improving the way you express that creativity. In general your lines are very stretched and redundant, the flow is irregular. You take too long to deliver the punch, and also the way you explain it is very long winded. If you condensed your words, you could improve a lot. Remember that it's always better to say more with less. If you can shorten a phrase, use less words, or take out words that aren't necessary, you should definitely do it.

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