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Old 04-20-08, 07:44 PM   #1
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Field Of Fire

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So Black's on some 1 minute intro thriller shit this time around.

STORY

Basically i've had several personas since i began rapping. Knight Sir Rebral, Merez, and Yanyeezy. I used to write alot back then and i came up with a bunch of dope ass punchlines and fragments. I never used them but didn't want to throw them away and found them coming up in alot of my new stuff even if it didn't really pertain to the song matter. In this song i called a meeting of all 3 personas to finish them once and for all. All my good lines, burn them all now in the...

FIELD OF FIRE

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The intro, sadly, took me like 2 hours find effects, put together, and weave properly into the song so...

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Old 04-21-08, 03:55 AM   #2
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pretty solid bro, mixing could be alot better, but overall it was smooth yo.
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Old 05-03-08, 05:45 PM   #3
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prettyy goodd bro keep it up
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Old 05-03-08, 10:47 PM   #4
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that intro's sick man, serious, nice shit with that...beat you using is dope..

ya, the vocals ain't sounding right, prolly should try some different effects or something guy...otherwise, this is cool man, flows on, lyrics cool...it was good stuff man...
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Old 05-08-08, 08:55 PM   #5
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listening, sick beat, real sick beat,like how your riding the beat,good vocabulary lyrics on point..the only thing i dont like is the reverb on your voice or the program your recording in, the quality of the sound of your voice is off to me..and during the end of the song you seem like your losing the fire..but over all good drop, i would bump in my ride..
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