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Old 08-20-08, 02:47 AM   #1
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Old 08-20-08, 02:49 AM   #2
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Old 08-20-08, 03:17 AM   #3
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Take My Soul.
Red = Man.

The love ...mixed with hopeless nights
Getting chocked, as we opened fights
I'm powerless, as he showers his fist
Empty inside ...... as I devour his wish
He grapples my neck, with no remorse
And of course ...his angers the source
I drown in tears ... now a sunken ship
Its calm tomorrow, till the drunkness hits

"I want you gone. All you do is abuse me.
You never even talk to me like a person"

Every step closer ..... we remain in a line
Cause every last thing thats hers, is mine
From behind the time, we laced our boots
So we took a shot, only to face the truth
And we waste our youth; only for today
Hoping she actually has something to say
We repay our debts, but yet still borrow
Cause' we can't talk today, maybe tomorrow
So untill she can how I want to be treated
She can keep this hell hole, fuck it I'm leavin'


"Was it my mistake? Something I said?
I don't wanna be alive, without her I'm dead"


I'm so lonely - got this house to myself
Drinking, thinking...what this lifes about
My life path is chosen, yes he's a rapist
Looking in the mirrior - it seems faceless
Can't face this! All my dreams - Wasted
Running out of blood...and my patience
I hate this. Wrist slits are fighting back
One, two.... way to many to keep track
I need him! I'm dieing, I can't be alone
Please baby! PLEASE! Pick up the phone

"Hello? Oh my god, I miss you so much!
What I'm aloud home? I'll be there shortly
...I Love you!"


And my last mistake was made just now
I keep wondering was it trust? But How?
The fights ...I know they are never ending
He understands the message I'm sending?
He's drunk. He knows he holds my whole
Dear jesus, to this man, I've sold my soul.
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Old 08-20-08, 05:27 AM   #4
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Old 08-22-08, 05:23 PM   #5
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I left this town..... to start a new life. To make it big........

Each footsteps an eternity as I inch closer towards my hometown,
This dead weight I'm dragging grows as I tromp over known ground,
An overgrown dirt trail I travel brings flashbacks of my young days,
When we shrouded ourself with pine trees to contain the sun rays,
But not tonight... The moon is covered and the thunder is deep,
No crickets singing. Only pools of rubble cracking under my feet,
Everythings so unfamiliar. I catch quick glimpses of town ruins,
But this deep fog is a mystery as my silhouette plows through it,
I walk across these burnt bridges. The water under at a stand still,
My childhood memories distorting and transforming into a landfill,
Entering the town limits the moon illuminates and acts as street lamps,
Reflecting off of the thousands of raindrops that left the trees damp,
Turning onto a graveled road littered with these forgotten memories,
Wondering for a fraction of a second if my footprints remember me,
Regaining my focus ahead. I continue and the roads getting colder,
Suddenly I feel a devilish stare boiling holes into my shoulders,
I shake off the glare cause this village is littered with lost souls,
Who's purpose serves to clarify all that glitters is not gold,
But I tread my path lightly, won't react to these actions,
I left this place to define myself and I didn't look back once,
Approaching an old rugged cabin. Covered in some dead vines,
Tearing away the weeds and leaves that blanketed the address sign,
Glancing once at the home. Turning my back and eyes with quick stride,
Walking away expressionless on the outside. But die on the inside,
Stop and wet my face in a puddle, wondering what I'm becoming.
Wait for water to settle to see my reflection. It does... I see nothing.
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